IL76 From Netherlands, joined Jan 2004, 2239 posts, RR: 47
Reply 1, posted (10 years 11 months 3 weeks 5 days ago) and read 3425 times:
Nice location, can you show me next time I'm in Sing? (Sept 2004)
The A340, the left half of the engine is softer than the rest, almost as if you photographed through an airplane window (blurry round the edges). BTW, did you use NeatImage or something like that? The bellies of the planes look a bit odd to me. Underneath the cockpit the bodywork panels/rivets look very sharp, but on the belly it's much softer.
The fact that you only see the left engine would make the screener tick 'badcentered' I guess.
Bad dark? I don't see it...
LHSebi From Germany, joined Jan 2004, 1049 posts, RR: 7
Reply 2, posted (10 years 11 months 3 weeks 4 days 23 hours ago) and read 3410 times:
I recently had some images rejected for baddark with similar lighting conditions. If you have the sun shining on one side of the plane, whith possibly the nose a little more lit than the rest of the body on the dark side, you have a problem. Since the sun (in your pictures) is coming from right side of the frame. This will obviously make the left side of the image (right side of the plane) relatively dark. You can try to make the overall brightness higher, but I'm afraid that will cause the nose to be overexposed, giving another rejection. One thing that has worked for me was to manually (using lasso or magic wand in PS) select the brighter parts, and make them slightly dimmer, or vice versa. Doing this however usually leaves the borders of the selection visible due to the differences in brightness, unless you do it very slightly.
Sorry if this is confusing...I'm quite tired today! I would try just overall brightening the image a bit, but make sure not to get too much white glare off the nose. About the badcentered...probably the fact that only one engine is showing. Did you crop lots from here?
Anyhow, I really like these photos! Hope I helped,
I guess that's what happens in the end, you start thinking about the beginning.
Beowulf From Singapore, joined Jul 2003, 742 posts, RR: 13
Reply 3, posted (10 years 11 months 3 weeks 4 days 22 hours ago) and read 3389 times:
I think both pictures are excellent because they convey the shere mass of the airplanes, esp. the Airbus image. However, there is something about the image which I find disturbing and this is the left engine. It gives the picture an odd feeling. Maybe next time try to get them from a different angle. Or take only a part of the image to underline the mass.