PRM From Ghana, joined Apr 2002, 348 posts, RR: 0 Reply 1, posted (6 years 10 months 1 day 22 hours ago) and read 1678 times:
Charles,
Nice shots - I like the Air Malta most. They're all oversharpened on the titles (lettering) and the registrations are jagged, plus around the engines on the TU-154 and the Thomas Cook. Air Malta should be easiest to fix.
Aero145 From Iceland, joined Jan 2005, 3070 posts, RR: 23 Reply 2, posted (6 years 10 months 1 day 22 hours ago) and read 1677 times:
Hi Charles!
1: Titles and reg. oversharpened. Nice shots nontheless!
2: Everything oversharpened - the skies are grainy 'cause of that. Very nice capture!
3: On my screen, it's blurry, pixelated, and oversharpened. I think you should crop to the aircraft, not to the building in the background. That is, 3:2 ratio - crop from the top and a little from the bottom.
Kukkudrill From Malta, joined Dec 2004, 1122 posts, RR: 5 Reply 3, posted (6 years 10 months 1 day 20 hours ago) and read 1651 times:
I love this forum. As soon as you start feeling hard done by, simply post your rejects and you will quickly be reminded that you are still on a learning curve. I've been there 2 years now, and I have no doubt that I'll still be there in 2 years time.
Thanks for the feedback guys. I liked no. 3 as a composition, but it was ever so slightly heat-distorted when seen at full size - I ignored this and I have justly paid the price.
Charles
Make the most of the available light ... a lesson of photography that applies to life