Dazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2572 posts, RR: 2 Reply 1, posted (6 years 8 months 3 weeks 6 days 15 hours ago) and read 2128 times:
I'm not sure about the motive, whether its acceptable or not (I like it, its a nice formation shot), but it looks unlevel to me. The photo looks like its leaning to the left. I think you need to rotate it clockwise if you can without cropping off the tail of the first aircraft. It also might be a bit dark (having suffered many of these recently myself!).
Darren
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Psych From United Kingdom, joined Nov 2004, 2968 posts, RR: 60 Reply 6, posted (6 years 8 months 3 weeks 6 days 6 hours ago) and read 2036 times:
Hi Chris.
My comment on the first would be that I would fear for a rejection. The first thing I noticed, even with the second edit, is the effect of the heat haze caused by the jet efflux. I think that is having a detrimental effect on the quality, from an A.net point of view. I also think it is still a bit gloomy.
As regards the second, you might be playing with 'motive' fire there . I think it carries a significant risk.
I saved a bunch of money on car insurance just kidding.
It is a nice capture. Just make sure to refer HB-IXH on your upload (which I believe you did). It sure looks dark coz of the shadow area...did you try to play it around?
The second picture might yield a bad motive though...do you have the same with the tail included?
Avro85 From Belgium, joined Jun 2005, 236 posts, RR: 2 Reply 8, posted (6 years 8 months 3 weeks 6 days 5 hours ago) and read 2024 times:
Hey Paul it's been a long time....
Quoting Psych (Reply 6): The first thing I noticed, even with the second edit, is the effect of the heat haze caused by the jet efflux. I think that is having a detrimental effect on the quality, from an A.net point of view.
Now that you mention it, I agree that the exhaust can be seen as detrimental on the picture. I will try to see if I can find a better picture in the series which I took.
Quoting VasanthD (Reply 7): It sure looks dark coz of the shadow area...did you try to play it around?
Yes I tried to play around with the levels, but if I play too much the quality is decreasing quite rapidely.... If only the sun would have been at the right place
Quoting Psych (Reply 6): As regards the second, you might be playing with 'motive' fire there
Let's hope the screener who will screen the picture will be gentle
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