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How Could This Be Improved?  
User currently offlinePictureThis From United Kingdom, joined Oct 2006, 196 posts, RR: 7
Posted (7 years 8 months 1 week 15 hours ago) and read 3148 times:

Hi All,

Nice and simple one really, how could this photo be improved?

Big version: Width: 1100 Height: 825 File size: 726kb


It is a preliminary edit, so anything you notice please tell as I would like it to be in database.

Thanks for the help.
Ryan


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User currently offlineDazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2913 posts, RR: 2
Reply 1, posted (7 years 8 months 1 week 13 hours ago) and read 3120 times:

Looks fantastic to me exactly as it is!

Darren



Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offline9V From China, joined Aug 2008, 0 posts, RR: 0
Reply 2, posted (7 years 8 months 1 week 13 hours ago) and read 3115 times:

Was it shot in RAW? I like the motive but it looks poorly exposed around the nose and cockpit windows and soft around certain parts like the wings but sharp around the engines. The aircraft also looks too low in the frame.

User currently offlinePictureThis From United Kingdom, joined Oct 2006, 196 posts, RR: 7
Reply 3, posted (7 years 8 months 1 week 12 hours ago) and read 3100 times:

Quoting Dazbo5 (Reply 1):
Looks fantastic to me exactly as it is!

Hi Darren, glad you like it!

Quoting 9V (Reply 2):
Was it shot in RAW? I like the motive but it looks poorly exposed around the nose and cockpit windows and soft around certain parts like the wings but sharp around the engines. The aircraft also looks too low in the frame.

Hi 9V.

No it wasn't shot in RAW. I've tried it out but I found some of the results to be more grainy than usual with my 300D. I remember Tim Goodwin having a similar problem with his.

Anyway, it amazes me how the exposure can vary from nose to the wings, how do you keep control of this? The sharpening can probably be improved by selective sharpening and I noticed it was too low when I uploaded it but I forgot to mention it.

Thanks for the help.

Any other ideas anyone?
Ryan



Make sure they know we're playing the game, but we don't need to play the game because we've already won the game.
User currently offlinePictureThis From United Kingdom, joined Oct 2006, 196 posts, RR: 7
Reply 4, posted (7 years 7 months 3 weeks 6 days 7 hours ago) and read 3033 times:

It was accepted:


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It is my 100th photo, thanks to everyone who has helped me so far!

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