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Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?  
User currently offlineDamien846 From UK - England, joined Dec 2006, 661 posts, RR: 0
Posted (7 years 5 months 1 week 23 hours ago) and read 3370 times:

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Hello again All,
Once again I need advice on this shot. Also is it a bit over sharpe?
Still got loads to learn ref editting!
Cheers
Damien

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User currently offlineBoeingfreak From Germany, joined May 2005, 398 posts, RR: 5
Reply 1, posted (7 years 5 months 1 week 22 hours ago) and read 3365 times:

Hi,
I'd crop it closer on the right side, it looks kind of cut off now. It is also a bit low in frame for my taste.
Hope this helps,
Florian  wave 


User currently offlineAC773 From Canada, joined Nov 2005, 1730 posts, RR: 2
Reply 2, posted (7 years 5 months 1 week 22 hours ago) and read 3364 times:

The first thing I notice here is that you've slightly clipped the horizontal stabilizer. This is just my opinion of course, but I think you should either leave some more space on the right to let it show or cut off more of it and go all the way with centering the fuselage. Personally, I don't like to see it done halfway.

Good job though Damien, I'm seeing very visible progress compared with some of your last shots. Keep it up!  bigthumbsup 



Better to be nouveau than never to have been riche at all.
User currently offlineBubbles From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 1195 posts, RR: 51
Reply 3, posted (7 years 5 months 1 week 21 hours ago) and read 3331 times:
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Hello Damien

I'd suggest keeping that stabilizer in the frame. By the way, the photo looks slightly soft. And the nose is a bit hot.

_Hongyin_


User currently offlineDamien846 From UK - England, joined Dec 2006, 661 posts, RR: 0
Reply 4, posted (7 years 5 months 1 week 19 hours ago) and read 3294 times:

Thanks for the advice.

Quoting Bubbles (Reply 3):
By the way, the photo looks slightly soft. And the nose is a bit hot.

Understand the hot nose. But not sure what you mean ref slighly soft?
here is a second attempt at an edit.
and below the orignal!

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User currently offlineJeffM From United States of America, joined May 2005, 3266 posts, RR: 51
Reply 5, posted (7 years 5 months 1 week 19 hours ago) and read 3291 times:

How many more pictures of that plane do you have?  rotfl  You should branch out a little.

User currently offlineDamien846 From UK - England, joined Dec 2006, 661 posts, RR: 0
Reply 6, posted (7 years 5 months 1 week 19 hours ago) and read 3285 times:

Quoting JeffM (Reply 5):
How many more pictures of that plane do you have? rotfl You should branch out a little.

Taken on this day? About 30? Would you like to see them all!
 biggrin 


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