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USN C-40A Shot - Critique Me  
User currently offlineFlynavy From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR:
Posted (7 years 2 months 2 weeks 12 hours ago) and read 1599 times:

I uploaded the following shot to the "other site" but wanted some of your opinions. Here's my current edit. I have the original for those interested. I'm honestly just curious what you will come up with, and if its even worth uploading here. Thanks in advance!

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a350/refleckt/165835critique_v1.jpg

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User currently offlineFlightShadow From United States of America, joined Jun 2005, 947 posts, RR: 6
Reply 1, posted (7 years 2 months 2 weeks 12 hours ago) and read 1590 times:

Nice shot! Problems I see: Dark and Centering. Some selective lightening, position the plane lower in the frame, and maybe a teeny bit of USM - that might make it it acceptable. I'd be happy to have a go at the original, if you'd like.


"When the tide goes out, you can tell who was skinnydipping."
User currently offlineFlynavy From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR:
Reply 2, posted (7 years 2 months 2 weeks 12 hours ago) and read 1584 times:

Here's the public link to the original file. Hopefully it doesn't require a membership! http://www.box.net/shared/ub3nh3xo45

User currently offlineFlightShadow From United States of America, joined Jun 2005, 947 posts, RR: 6
Reply 3, posted (7 years 2 months 2 weeks 6 hours ago) and read 1547 times:

I'm in no way a pro, but here is my attempt

http://www.slcspotters.com/A/navyc40.jpg

It's brightened a little bit so it takes some of the darker highlights out - I'm not sure if that's what you want or not. It's also re-cropped and I added some USM. Like I said, I don't know if that's what you're lookin' for...

[Edited 2007-04-30 07:03:41]


"When the tide goes out, you can tell who was skinnydipping."
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