Lanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 978 posts, RR: 13
Reply 1, posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 6 days 8 hours ago) and read 2881 times:
I believe the three first would be facing a motive rejection, specially the last two within these. The first one is better but I believe that if you cut a bit on the sides, focusing only in the panel and the windscreen, it would be more appealing. However, the shot is soft and has some colour cast (might say a bit reddish, IMO).
The fourth shot will be killed by motive because of the stairs, I guess. It´s also a bit too dark.
Hope it helps.
"Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens." J.R.R. Tolkien
Every feedback is appreciated! I will try a tighter crop on the first one, but as you also thought, there is the possibility for motiv-reject... But, no problem, I like them also in my personal website
PS: my slides were also on the dark side, and while trying to lighten them in PS, they become too grainy...