Boeingfreak From Germany, joined May 2005, 398 posts, RR: 6 Reply 1, posted (5 years 11 months 4 weeks 8 hours ago) and read 928 times:
Hi,
your first shot is a bit soft especially around the passenger windows, the "Austrian Arrows" titles, the cockpit windows and around the nose. For my taste the nose is also a bit too bright.
Your second one is clearly overexposed, the white top of the A320 is blown out.
With some proper editing both could be made acceptable, the first one is easy to correct, the second one only if the original is a RAW file.