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User currently offlineFlamedude707 From United States of America, joined Jun 2005, 235 posts, RR: 0
Posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 3 days 5 hours ago) and read 3325 times:

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/big/ready/wing233453434.jpg

In the queue... please let me know if it needs to be improved or pulled.

Thanks

Ashwin


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User currently offlineEadster From Australia, joined Jan 2005, 2216 posts, RR: 14
Reply 1, posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 3 days ago) and read 3297 times:

To me its slightly jaggered, yet parts of the trailing edge are very soft.

I think the cloud cover kinda ruins the view. Or maybe the mountains should be a little further into the frame.

I'm not sure how that one will do. Better wait for some other opinions.


User currently offlineAcontador From Chile, joined Jul 2005, 1421 posts, RR: 30
Reply 2, posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 2 days 19 hours ago) and read 3271 times:
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Hi Ashwin,

To me the wing looks slightly soft/out of focus (but watch those black lines, they are just about to be oversharpened), and maybe it would need a tad more contrast. Motive-wise should be OK.



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User currently offlineLanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 978 posts, RR: 13
Reply 3, posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 2 days 17 hours ago) and read 3258 times:

Ashwin

Nice pic!
There´s too much non-aircraft space to the left, which makes the picture a bit unbalanced, IMO. I´d crop out a bit of this, maybe with a 4:3 frame ratio it can work better.
Wing is too soft, if not out of focus, and there are some jagged lines, as Martin said. I agree with the low contrast also.
The ground looks too blue, is it normal for such kind of shot?

Hope it helps.  thumbsup 

Cheers  Smile
Lanas.-



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User currently offlineFlamedude707 From United States of America, joined Jun 2005, 235 posts, RR: 0
Reply 4, posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 2 days 13 hours ago) and read 3238 times:

re edit with crop and some other changes...

Please tell me what can be improved. I think it still may be a bit jagged.

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/big/ready/wingedit12332.jpg

Thanks

Ashwin

PS. Here is the original. If anyone can give it a try at editing this, it would be greatly appreciated.
Big version: Width: 2816 Height: 1880 File size: 1295kb


[Edited 2007-06-14 21:49:32]


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User currently offlineLanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 978 posts, RR: 13
Reply 5, posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 2 days 9 hours ago) and read 3221 times:

Quoting Flamedude707 (Reply 4):
Please tell me what can be improved. I think it still may be a bit jagged.

Improved, motive-wise, but quality is still an issue. Wing is jagged and soft (flap edges are out of focus). Also deserves some more contrast. I´ll give it a go from scratch and let you know.

Cheers!  Smile
Lanas.-



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User currently offlineLanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 978 posts, RR: 13
Reply 6, posted (7 years 2 months 1 week 2 days 5 hours ago) and read 3204 times:

Ashwin

Here´s my attempt. I tried to work with the sharpening, at first, and some minor adjustments to contrast and brightness. There´s still work to do on the bright mountains and the overall colour, but I didn´t know actually how to face these issues.
Hope it helps. Big grin

Airbus Wing

Cheers  thumbsup 
Lanas.-



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