Flamedude707 From United States of America, joined Jun 2005, 235 posts, RR: 0 Posted (5 years 11 months 2 weeks 3 days 11 hours ago) and read 1898 times:
Acontador From Chile, joined Jul 2005, 1392 posts, RR: 33 Reply 2, posted (5 years 11 months 2 weeks 3 days 1 hour ago) and read 1844 times:
Hi Ashwin,
To me the wing looks slightly soft/out of focus (but watch those black lines, they are just about to be oversharpened), and maybe it would need a tad more contrast. Motive-wise should be OK.
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Lanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 977 posts, RR: 15 Reply 3, posted (5 years 11 months 2 weeks 2 days 23 hours ago) and read 1831 times:
Ashwin
Nice pic!
There´s too much non-aircraft space to the left, which makes the picture a bit unbalanced, IMO. I´d crop out a bit of this, maybe with a 4:3 frame ratio it can work better.
Wing is too soft, if not out of focus, and there are some jagged lines, as Martin said. I agree with the low contrast also.
The ground looks too blue, is it normal for such kind of shot?
Hope it helps.
Cheers
Lanas.-
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Flamedude707 From United States of America, joined Jun 2005, 235 posts, RR: 0 Reply 4, posted (5 years 11 months 2 weeks 2 days 19 hours ago) and read 1811 times:
re edit with crop and some other changes...
Please tell me what can be improved. I think it still may be a bit jagged.
Lanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 977 posts, RR: 15 Reply 5, posted (5 years 11 months 2 weeks 2 days 14 hours ago) and read 1794 times:
Quoting Flamedude707 (Reply 4): Please tell me what can be improved. I think it still may be a bit jagged.
Improved, motive-wise, but quality is still an issue. Wing is jagged and soft (flap edges are out of focus). Also deserves some more contrast. I´ll give it a go from scratch and let you know.
Cheers!
Lanas.-
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Lanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 977 posts, RR: 15 Reply 6, posted (5 years 11 months 2 weeks 2 days 11 hours ago) and read 1777 times:
Ashwin
Here´s my attempt. I tried to work with the sharpening, at first, and some minor adjustments to contrast and brightness. There´s still work to do on the bright mountains and the overall colour, but I didn´t know actually how to face these issues.
Hope it helps.
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