Psych From United Kingdom, joined Nov 2004, 3077 posts, RR: 53
Reply 2, posted (8 years 9 months 2 weeks 1 day 10 hours ago) and read 3045 times:
A very nice photo. I agree with EK20 that it looks to be in need of something like half a degree or so of CCW rotation, judging by the tarmac level and also the crop line in the distance.
Do you have the complete tail in the reflection on the original? If so I think that would enhance the motive here, and enable you to legitimately place the aircraft higher in the frame.
For me the key issue - other than the level - is the colour. I know what you say about the last rays of sunlight, but I would expect this to create a 'warmer' look to the image. As it is the predominant colour cast is more green. That may be an issue.