LHRjc From Netherlands, joined Apr 2006, 1964 posts, RR: 20 Posted (7 years 2 weeks 2 days 2 hours ago) and read 3370 times:
My acceptance ratio is slowly getting better, but I am having trouble editing these 2. I don't think I'm going to be able to edit them to a sufficient standard to make it into the DB, but before I give up I thought I'd ask for your help just in case there's anything that can be done. Any suggestions ?
"Our 319's are very reliable. They get fixed very quickly."
I don't know where you see some baklit in this shot, as the sun is illuminating the complete fuselage.. better think of what you write before writing it..
As for the first shot, It is a bit soft around the nose, and the titles on the No. 2 engine and the tail, but be careful as some parts like the flaps are already a little bit oversharpened and show some minor jaggies..
Maybe give it a little tad less contrast, as this also helps to darken the picture a bit (the fuselage is a little bit to shiny for me... the light reflex doesn't really help either!)
And maybe a little less red and a bit more blue....
For the second: I would say it is also to bright and maybe a little tad oversharpened in some parts and a very little tad soft in others otherwise it looks ok to me..