Scottieprecord From United States of America, joined Jul 2004, 1363 posts, RR: 12 Reply 1, posted (5 years 5 months 2 weeks 3 days 12 hours ago) and read 1279 times:
Hey there.. quite a ways away from Airventure! haha
Let's see, the first shot I think is pretty much killed by the glare on the P-51 - I really hope you have another shot in the sequence because I really liked that heritage flight!
The second shot I believe is good to upload. - mayybe a little more contrast. I can't decide on that.
The third looks a little soft and a little dark. A kick of USM (around 200% at .2) and some brightness should do it.
Airventure was a heckuva show this year.. can't wait for '08!
-Mike
N243NW From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 1489 posts, RR: 21 Reply 2, posted (5 years 5 months 2 weeks 3 days 6 hours ago) and read 1253 times:
Quoting Scottieprecord (Reply 1): I really hope you have another shot in the sequence because I really liked that heritage flight!
I wish I had another that was as sharp as this...the other ones were either out of focus or had very slight motion blur (this was back when I was just getting used to my new SLR).
Lanas From Argentina, joined Aug 2006, 977 posts, RR: 15 Reply 3, posted (5 years 5 months 2 weeks 2 days 22 hours ago) and read 1223 times:
Hi Ryan
My comments on your shots:
#1 is overexposed and grainy. The reflection on the P-51 kills the shot, but the whites on this aircraft are also quite blown out.
#2 is a tad oversharpened. The colours are very lively, but I think the problem might be in the contrast, as Mike said. The bright background doesn´t help, also. Second edit is pretty similar as the first one.
#3 is a bit blurry, rather than soft, and in your first edit you sharpened it a bit too much in order to compensate that. The second edit on this one is even more jagged.
Hope it helps. Good luck with them!
Cheers
Lanas.-
"Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens." J.R.R. Tolkien
N243NW From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 1489 posts, RR: 21 Reply 4, posted (5 years 5 months 2 weeks 2 days 21 hours ago) and read 1210 times:
Thanks Lanas!
I've always wondered about sharpening, as I have an LCD and I have heard that jaggies may appear on my monitor even though the photo in question may not be oversharpened. It always helps to get a second opinion, in this case.
I guess I'll tone down the USM in the Grumman shot and upload that one. One of three isn't too bad considering my gear and experience.