They both appear to be slightly over-sharpened as I can see some jaggies on the leading edges (more so in the Avro). Also, the Avro looks to be a little low in the frame. Good luck!
CSA: Contrast is high. Small jaggies in places.
OO-DJL: Contrast is also high. The plane is a little low in frame. Colour is slightly off. And a dust spot in sky. Small jaggies in places.
Look quite soft on my screen. Which sort of worries me, since that means that the ones I have uploaded are way too sharp, assuming you're on your screening computer.
Therefore, here are just a few of mine. Comments on sharpness, please?
ANITIX87 From Switzerland, joined Mar 2005, 2077 posts, RR: 10 Reply 9, posted (1 month 1 week 5 days 10 hours ago) and read 2745 times:
Quoting Bubbles (Reply 7): I am not on my screening monitor at the moment. But I still could say that I see jaggies on all photos you posted here.
Not what I wanted to hear, haha. If a screener happens to look at mine on their Dell, I'd love some comments. Most of my shots are this sharp, and I don't want 12/12 rejected for sharpness, which has always been my achilles heel, though I usually make them too soft!
Quoting Damien846 (Reply 8): What do you guys and girls think of this one in the queue.
I LOVE it!!! I can't comment on sharpness (see above disastrous examples) but the motive, contrast, color, and quality look very good!
Shanwick From Germany, joined Oct 2005, 5 posts, RR: 0 Reply 12, posted (1 month 1 week 5 days 5 hours ago) and read 2721 times:
Hi,
need some help with this rejected photo (reasons: level and qualitiy) Any chance to improve the quality and what's the point I have to pay attention? Presently I have no idea what's the reason for (bad) quality.
ANITIX87 From Switzerland, joined Mar 2005, 2077 posts, RR: 10 Reply 15, posted (1 month 1 week 4 days 15 hours ago) and read 2673 times:
Quoting Bubbles (Reply 10): Checked them all on Dell. Yes, oversharpened.
Ok, thanks. Have pulled all since I don't want to waste a screener's time and don't want to reduce my ratio. Will re-edit and re-upload and will ask here again on Sunday night when I'm back home.
Very glad to see these threads working so well, and screeners more than willing to help out!
ANITIX87 From Switzerland, joined Mar 2005, 2077 posts, RR: 10 Reply 17, posted (1 month 1 week 4 days 14 hours ago) and read 2661 times:
Quoting Flynavy (Reply 16): I'm unsure about this shot's crop; it just looks strange to me. Input? BTW - I leveled to the Renny Hotel in the background.
I think the crop is ok, but the shot is definitely not level. Did you use the roof of the hotel, or the vertical right edge? You should ALWAYS use verticals when leveling, never horizontals. This is because a vertical is vertical no matter what, but unless you are looking at a building DEAD ON, the roof will not be vertical due to the perspective our eyes use when looking at distances.