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Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)  
User currently offlineSmonkcaptain From United Kingdom, joined Dec 2006, 41 posts, RR: 0
Posted (5 years 3 months 1 week 5 days 15 hours ago) and read 1815 times:

Hey all,

How does this one shape up?

http://www5.picturepush.com/photo/a/1817863/img/JP.NET-%2526-A.NET-Prescreening/PH-BXPfront.jpg

Thankyou in advanced!

Jimmy Leaman


Regards, Jimmy Leaman.
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User currently offlineAlevik From Canada, joined Mar 2009, 1025 posts, RR: 8
Reply 1, posted (5 years 3 months 1 week 5 days 14 hours ago) and read 1797 times:
AIRLINERS.NET CREW
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The nose seems soft and overexposed.

How much sharpening did you apply? I can see some jaggies on the titles and vert stabilizer.

I suck at centering, but I'd move it up just a touch in the frame.



Improvise, adapt, overcome.
User currently offlineDazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2913 posts, RR: 2
Reply 2, posted (5 years 3 months 1 week 5 days 9 hours ago) and read 1770 times:

There also seems to be a slight red colour cast too.

Darren



Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offlineSpiderguy252 From India, joined Feb 2009, 280 posts, RR: 0
Reply 3, posted (5 years 3 months 1 week 5 days 9 hours ago) and read 1769 times:



Quoting Alevik (Reply 1):
I'd move it up just a touch in the frame.

I don't think centering is too much of a problem here, it looks just about right to me. Those other issues you mentioned are visibly apparent, though.



Figure .09
User currently offlineSmonkcaptain From United Kingdom, joined Dec 2006, 41 posts, RR: 0
Reply 4, posted (5 years 3 months 1 week 4 days 2 hours ago) and read 1733 times:

Hey all.

Ive reworked the image based on your advice and here is the result.

How do you think it looks?

http://www2.picturepush.com/photo/a/1824915/img/JP.NET-%2526-A.NET-Prescreening/PH-BXPfront.jpg

Thanks in advanced.



Regards, Jimmy Leaman.
User currently offlineAcontador From Chile, joined Jul 2005, 1421 posts, RR: 30
Reply 5, posted (5 years 3 months 1 week 4 days 2 hours ago) and read 1728 times:
AIRLINERS.NET CREW
PHOTO SCREENER

Hi Jimmy,

The new edit looks too soft, but more important, whatever you did to the nose looks very unnatural - that would be an 'editing' rejection. As far as I can see, the nose is probably too overexposed in the first place to be rescued, so it will probably never make it - sorry.

Hope it helps  Smile



Just sit back, relax and have a glass of Merlot...enjoy your life!
User currently offlineSmonkcaptain From United Kingdom, joined Dec 2006, 41 posts, RR: 0
Reply 6, posted (5 years 3 months 1 week 3 days 23 hours ago) and read 1716 times:

Hello, thanks for your prompt reply.

I agree with you regarding the nose, however i think applied to much 'burn tool', so i will give it a sharpen and another shot and let you know.

Thanks.



Regards, Jimmy Leaman.
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