Donkmcgonk From Netherlands, joined Mar 2009, 12 posts, RR: 0 Posted (5 years 1 month 1 week 3 days 1 hour ago) and read 4315 times:
I went to the Luchtmacht Open Dagen(Airforce Recruting Day) in Volkel yesterday, and took about 400+ shots, and here is what I got what I thought was the best and did my best editing it accordingly. Any advice is appreciated.
AirKas1 From Netherlands, joined Dec 2003, 3968 posts, RR: 55
Reply 1, posted (5 years 1 month 1 week 3 days ago) and read 4287 times:
Most of the shots are too distant for A.net. You've got a couple of shots that I suspect will get a motive rejection (the Gulfstream IV with the 4 cars looks nice, but unsure of the motive). The A-10 just looks wrong, especially the clouds (too much photoshop?). The C-17 tail doesn't do it for me either.
You could try cropping the shots a bit closer (the Orange Lion looks ok, just needs some more cropping).