Korg747 From United States of America, joined Mar 2003, 549 posts, RR: 5 Posted (9 years 2 months 2 weeks 14 hours ago) and read 2019 times:
I've made this song and I really think it's moving but I really tend to think that I'm the only one who thinks that? I'm not looking for praises, I'm looking for you guys to tell me what you feel with this music regardless of your favourit style of music. Does this song make you feel anything at all?
Rolfen From Germany, joined Jan 2006, 1821 posts, RR: 3
Reply 1, posted (9 years 2 months 2 weeks 12 hours ago) and read 2000 times:
That violin sound is not right. There's a lot of potential. But you need to:
- Choose a better sound for the violin, maybe go an octave lower.
- work on the violin melody, there's too much fluctuation and variation and some notes sound wrong.