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Does This Music Make You Feel Anything?  
User currently offlineKorg747 From United States of America, joined Mar 2003, 549 posts, RR: 5
Posted (8 years 1 month 1 week 4 days 19 hours ago) and read 1499 times:

I've made this song and I really think it's moving but I really tend to think that I'm the only one who thinks that? I'm not looking for praises, I'm looking for you guys to tell me what you feel with this music regardless of your favourit style of music. Does this song make you feel anything at all?

www.myspace.com/sheriefmusic

The first song : God's sad heart

Looking forward to your opinions as I value them alot.


Please excuse my English!
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User currently offlineRolfen From Germany, joined Jan 2006, 1803 posts, RR: 2
Reply 1, posted (8 years 1 month 1 week 4 days 17 hours ago) and read 1480 times:

That violin sound is not right. There's a lot of potential. But you need to:
- Choose a better sound for the violin, maybe go an octave lower.
- work on the violin melody, there's too much fluctuation and variation and some notes sound wrong.



rolf
User currently offlineAirPacific747 From Denmark, joined May 2008, 2376 posts, RR: 21
Reply 2, posted (8 years 1 month 1 week 4 days 17 hours ago) and read 1476 times:

Very good!!! But just like Rolfen pointed out, there's something about the violin that doesn't sound right.

I get a little depressed when listening to the song, whether that is good or bad, but it shows that I do get moved by it.


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