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User currently offlineYWG From Canada, joined Feb 2001, 1147 posts, RR: 2
Posted (11 years 11 months 1 week 6 days 7 hours ago) and read 2654 times:

Hey guys, my french exam is comming up soon and I have to do an oral exam with my teacher, just like talking. But I have to memorize a paragraph about my favorite sport, and I'm not the best an writting french, so I had my buddy freetranslation.com help me out. COuld anyone who speaks french go through it an edit it and make it sound normal and not crappy? I know i'm missing accent everywhere, but it doesn't matter, I can speak it.

mon sport prefere sais le planche a neige. Jadore le sport dans l'hivers. Le planch a neige est un sport de groupe. Tous mes amis le font. Vous pouvez snowboard n'importe où dans le monde, mais seulement dans l'hiver. Vous pouvez faire des tours et stunts , et ne ce pas est extrêmement dangereux. Je l'aime aussi parce-que vous pouvez aller avec vos amis et tres d'amusement, au milieu de l'hiver quand il y a de rien faire. C'est cher dans le commencement, mais dans la fin, c'est la valeur il. Et ton mon opinion, le plache a neige est le mieux sport au monde.

Any help would be great guys.
Blair




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User currently offlineYWg From Canada, joined Feb 2001, 1147 posts, RR: 2
Reply 1, posted (11 years 11 months 1 week 6 days 7 hours ago) and read 2647 times:

Here's a slightly corrected version, which makes sense.

Mon sport prefere sais le planche a neige. Jadore le sport dans L'HIVERS. Le planch a neige est un sport de groupe. Tous mes amis le font. Vous pouvez snowboard n'importe où dans le monde, mais seulement dans l'hiver. Vous pouvez faire des tours et stunts, et ne ce pas est extrêmement dangereux. Je l'aime aussi car vous pouviez aller avec vos amis et s'est tres amusant,au millieu de l'hivers quand il y a rien a faire.C'est chere dans le commencement, mais dans la fin, c'est la valeur de tous. Mon opinion,le planche a neige est le meuilleur sport au monde.



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User currently offline707cmf From France, joined Mar 2002, 4885 posts, RR: 29
Reply 2, posted (11 years 11 months 1 week 6 days 1 hour ago) and read 2629 times:

Okay. You may need help from a real French guy here  Wink/being sarcastic

Mon sport préféré est le snowboard. (we call it like that). J'adore les sports d'hiver, et le snowboard est un sport de groupe. Tous mes amis en font. Vous pouvez en faire n'importe où dans le monde, mais seulement l'hiver. Vous pouvez faire des tours et des acrobaties, ce n'est pas extrêmement dangereux. Je l'aime aussi car on peut en faire avec des amis ; et c'est très amusant, au milieu de l'hiver quand il n'y a rien à faire. C'est cher au début, mais à la fin, ça vaut le coup (it's worth it). A mon avis, le Snowboard est le meilleur sport au monde.

Now, if your teacher is from Quebec, he (she?) may dislike the use of the english word in 'Snowboard'. You can also call it "surf des neiges", but French people now prefer 'Snowboard'.

Hope this helps, and feel free to come anytime in the French Alps to ski with me  Wink/being sarcastic

Antoine


User currently offlineD-AIGW From Hong Kong, joined Jul 2001, 261 posts, RR: 1
Reply 3, posted (11 years 11 months 1 week 5 days 21 hours ago) and read 2626 times:

Je l'aime aussi car on peut en faire avec des amis

Just a little question:
What's the difference in the usage of "car" and "parce que"?
In here I would rather say, "Je l'aime aussi parce qu'on peut en faire avec des amis!"


User currently offline707cmf From France, joined Mar 2002, 4885 posts, RR: 29
Reply 4, posted (11 years 11 months 1 week 5 days 21 hours ago) and read 2622 times:

What's the difference in the usage of "car" and "parce que"?

Beats me. Usage and meaning is roughly the same for both in common language. 'car' may be more written language oriented than 'parce que'. I've kept 'car' here because it was okay, but it is true 'parce que' might be slightly more appropriate for oral speech.

Antoine


User currently offlineYWG From Canada, joined Feb 2001, 1147 posts, RR: 2
Reply 5, posted (11 years 11 months 1 week 5 days 10 hours ago) and read 2611 times:

Thanks alot guys. My teacher is from I dunno, but I was tought to say it planche a neige. Oh and I have to memorize this for thursday Jan 16th :P
Blair from Winnipeg



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