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User currently offlineKilavoud From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR:
Posted (10 years 6 months 4 days 21 hours ago) and read 1129 times:

During our next trip in USA X.Y. and myself will stop over in LA. As we never met before, we would like you to arrange our first-ever meeting during the day of March X and why not take this opportunity to visit your business premises ? If both our suggestion and the day suit you, please let me know about it. Best regards…….

Does it sound like American english ? Please correct. I will appreciate and thank you for helping me to progress in American english.

Cheers. Kilavoud.





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User currently offlineSushka From United States of America, joined Nov 1999, 4784 posts, RR: 14
Reply 1, posted (10 years 6 months 4 days 21 hours ago) and read 1117 times:

Here:

During our next trip to USA X.Y. and will stop over in LA. Because we have never met, I would like to arrange our first meeting on March X, at the same time we could get to know your business area. Let me know if this can work out. Best regards...............



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User currently offlineTWFirst From Vatican City, joined Apr 2000, 6346 posts, RR: 52
Reply 2, posted (10 years 6 months 4 days 21 hours ago) and read 1115 times:

My suggestion:

During our next trip to the U.S.A., X.Y. and I will stop over in L.A. Since we have never met, I would like to arrange our first meeting on March X. At that time, we could also get to know more about your business. Please let me know if this is possible.

Thank you.
Best regards,
Kilavoud Schwitzermann



An unexamined life isn't worth living.
User currently offlineKilavoud From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR:
Reply 3, posted (10 years 6 months 4 days 21 hours ago) and read 1111 times:

Thank you for your help . Already two answers . Really nice !

Cheers. Kilavoud.


User currently offlineTranceport From Canada, joined Jul 2003, 282 posts, RR: 1
Reply 4, posted (10 years 6 months 4 days 18 hours ago) and read 1080 times:

It doesn't get any better than TWFirst's response. Besides being American English, the grammar is perfect and the wording is professional.



User currently offlineUSAIRWAYS321 From United States of America, joined Jul 2001, 1845 posts, RR: 9
Reply 5, posted (10 years 6 months 4 days 2 hours ago) and read 1043 times:

I agree, TWFirst's version is the best way this can be worded.

Brett


User currently offlineL-188 From United States of America, joined Jul 1999, 29792 posts, RR: 58
Reply 6, posted (10 years 6 months 4 days 2 hours ago) and read 1037 times:

I would change the last line of TWfirsts translation

Please let me know if this is possible.

to


During our next trip to the U.S.A., X.Y. and I will stop over in L.A. Since we have never met, I would like to arrange our first meeting on March X. At that time, we could also get to know more about your business.

Please contact me if a meeting at that time can be arranged .

[Edited 2004-02-01 12:55:39]


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User currently offlineFly727 From Mexico, joined Jul 2003, 1789 posts, RR: 19
Reply 7, posted (10 years 6 months 3 days 15 hours ago) and read 1008 times:

Just in case you cancel it and decide to go to Mexico Big grin :

Durante nuestro próximo viaje a los México, X.Y y yo haremos una escala en Cancun. Puesto que nos conocemos todavía, me gustaría que programáramos nuestra primera reunión el día X de Marzo. Podríamos aprovechar y conocer más acerca de su negocio. Hágame saber si esto es posible.

Gracias.
Kilovoud Schwitzermann.

RM  Smile



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User currently offlinePHX-LJU From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR:
Reply 8, posted (10 years 6 months 3 days 11 hours ago) and read 988 times:

But if you board the wrong plane and end up in Slovenia  Big grin, this is what you'll need:

Ko bom naslednjic obiskal Slovenijo, se bova XY in jaz ustavila v Ljubljani. Ker se se nisva spoznala, bi za X marec predlagal prvi sestanek. Takrat pa bi lahko tudi spoznal vase podjetje. Prosim sporocite mi, ce je to mozno.

(Note: I've omitted special Slovenian characters for the ch, sh, and zh sounds.)


User currently offlineCory6188 From United States of America, joined Feb 2004, 2686 posts, RR: 6
Reply 9, posted (10 years 6 months 3 days ago) and read 970 times:

Although your initial attempt may not sound like American English, your writing definitely seems highly intelligent and sophisticated. Since you're from Switzerland, I'm going to assume that English is not your first language. Excellent job considering that English isn't your first language - it can definitely be a challenge.

User currently offlineGarnetpalmetto From United States of America, joined Oct 2003, 5366 posts, RR: 53
Reply 10, posted (10 years 6 months 2 days 23 hours ago) and read 962 times:

Actually, using x, y, and I is incorrect due to the series being more than 2 total individuals. "meet myself, x, and y" would be more correct.


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User currently offlineCovert From Ghana, joined Oct 2001, 1450 posts, RR: 2
Reply 11, posted (10 years 6 months 2 days 17 hours ago) and read 946 times:

You could use British English or American English, it doesn't matter, just as long as you keep it grammitically sound and professional.

covert



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