Kilavoud From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR: Posted (11 years 4 months 1 day 19 hours ago) and read 1414 times:
During our next trip in USA X.Y. and myself will stop over in LA. As we never met before, we would like you to arrange our first-ever meeting during the day of March X and why not take this opportunity to visit your business premises ? If both our suggestion and the day suit you, please let me know about it. Best regards…….
Does it sound like American english ? Please correct. I will appreciate and thank you for helping me to progress in American english.
Sushka From United States of America, joined Nov 1999, 4784 posts, RR: 14
Reply 1, posted (11 years 4 months 1 day 19 hours ago) and read 1402 times:
During our next trip to USA X.Y. and will stop over in LA. Because we have never met, I would like to arrange our first meeting on March X, at the same time we could get to know your business area. Let me know if this can work out. Best regards...............
TWFirst From Vatican City, joined Apr 2000, 6346 posts, RR: 51
Reply 2, posted (11 years 4 months 1 day 19 hours ago) and read 1400 times:
During our next trip to the U.S.A., X.Y. and I will stop over in L.A. Since we have never met, I would like to arrange our first meeting on March X. At that time, we could also get to know more about your business. Please let me know if this is possible.
L-188 From United States of America, joined Jul 1999, 30023 posts, RR: 58
Reply 6, posted (11 years 4 months 1 day ago) and read 1322 times:
I would change the last line of TWfirsts translation
Please let me know if this is possible.
During our next trip to the U.S.A., X.Y. and I will stop over in L.A. Since we have never met, I would like to arrange our first meeting on March X. At that time, we could also get to know more about your business.
Please contact me if a meeting at that time can be arranged .
[Edited 2004-02-01 12:55:39]
OBAMA-WORST PRESIDENT EVER....Even SKOORB would be better.
Fly727 From Mexico, joined Jul 2003, 1790 posts, RR: 16
Reply 7, posted (11 years 4 months 13 hours ago) and read 1293 times:
Just in case you cancel it and decide to go to Mexico :
Durante nuestro próximo viaje a los México, X.Y y yo haremos una escala en Cancun. Puesto que nos conocemos todavía, me gustaría que programáramos nuestra primera reunión el día X de Marzo. Podríamos aprovechar y conocer más acerca de su negocio. Hágame saber si esto es posible.
There are no stupid questions... just stupid people!
PHX-LJU From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR:
Reply 8, posted (11 years 4 months 9 hours ago) and read 1273 times:
But if you board the wrong plane and end up in Slovenia , this is what you'll need:
Ko bom naslednjic obiskal Slovenijo, se bova XY in jaz ustavila v Ljubljani. Ker se se nisva spoznala, bi za X marec predlagal prvi sestanek. Takrat pa bi lahko tudi spoznal vase podjetje. Prosim sporocite mi, ce je to mozno.
(Note: I've omitted special Slovenian characters for the ch, sh, and zh sounds.)
Cory6188 From United States of America, joined Feb 2004, 2713 posts, RR: 5
Reply 9, posted (11 years 3 months 4 weeks 1 day 21 hours ago) and read 1255 times:
Although your initial attempt may not sound like American English, your writing definitely seems highly intelligent and sophisticated. Since you're from Switzerland, I'm going to assume that English is not your first language. Excellent job considering that English isn't your first language - it can definitely be a challenge.