Logan22L From , joined Dec 1969, posts, RR:
Reply 2, posted (10 years 9 months 1 week 6 days 1 hour ago) and read 3402 times:
Well, a couple of things. I'm being blunt, but you asked for input. Don't take this personally, it's business:
1. Horrible name
2. The first two logos are annoying because the apostrophe is too low.
3. The third logo is, to me, the most eye catching, however, I can't even begin to explain the weird feeling I got seeing the very arabic-looking font being used to describe Jew'L.
4. If you want help, make it easier for us by putting the links in <> so they actually link to the site.
5. My advice, blow it up, and start over.
6. Good luck
Jayce From Canada, joined Nov 1999, 520 posts, RR: 0
Reply 5, posted (10 years 9 months 1 week 6 days 1 hour ago) and read 3392 times:
I've designed logos and business cards as a side project for some time now. I'm at work at the moment, but I'll try and come up with some later on tonight for you. Shall I e-mail them to you when I'm done?
"Trying is the first step towards failure" -Homer Simpson
Yazoo From United States of America, joined Aug 2001, 488 posts, RR: 0
Reply 9, posted (10 years 9 months 1 week 6 days ago) and read 3342 times:
No this is not a "real" shop, but rather a Business School project ( starting and running a real company, in this case, selling jewelry)
the guy who was appointed as "marketing" manager thinks that he's very "creative" (which is definetly not my opinion if you ask me). He's the one who came up with the name (which I didnt approve at all) and also with the 3rd Logo (the arabic/jewish looking one) Im only the appointed Financial manager so I have no business to do with Marketing, but I still think that they did a horrible job with the name and the logo, and Im trying to find ways to improve it, why? well, to SELL!... that goes for the curious...