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Topic: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-03 15:24:14 and read 2926 times.

Hello

I've just submitted this one:

1 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/w1349301897.8369img_1257-1.jpg

2 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...eady/r1349303336.986img_1222-1.jpg


Would like your feedback about it and it´s chances of acceptance.

Thx

[Edited 2012-10-03 15:30:21]

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dazbo5
Posted 2012-10-03 15:44:17 and read 2918 times.

Quoting Patich (Thread starter):
Would like your feedback about it and it´s chances of acceptance.

1. This looks oversharp on my screen towards the rear of the aircraft while the nose looks a little soft.
2. Possibly a little heat hazed and oversharp trying to compensate for it?

Darren

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-03 17:14:49 and read 2909 times.

Agree with Darren both slightly os, but I think should be passable

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-04 12:20:46 and read 2866 times.

Thank you both for your inputs and glad that you think they are passable.

Photo 1 has no sharp added, except the export sharp.

Photo 2 had just a little bit, but way less then what I used to use.

Something definitly changed with my photos this couple of months to be nedding no sharp.

[Edited 2012-10-04 13:00:13]

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-05 03:56:39 and read 2836 times.

Hello

Please comment on these two. One is a pre-screening and the other a post-screening

Pre-screening:
Following the OS issue I had, this one is the first time i use the sharp slider to the left.
1 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b.../q1349386153.6948img_1176-1-24.jpg

Post- screening:
Rejected by Grainy and Category "Not dark category"
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r...001_k1348264662.4461img_0926-3.jpg

Changed the NR, Masking and a little twick on the exposure. However I still have a doubt: Should the Dark category be selected, as the photo was taken after the sunset?
2 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/a1349433919.6988img_0926-1.jpg

[Edited 2012-10-05 03:59:59]

[Edited 2012-10-05 04:00:22]

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-05 06:20:47 and read 2824 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 4):
Pre-screening:

Still a touch os, but might be passable.

Quoting Patich (Reply 4):
Post- screening:

If the sun was below the horizon, then 'Dark' was the correct category to select. New version looks a bit dark/soft.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-05 06:54:52 and read 2822 times.

Thanks Dana

Pre-screening:
Trying to get it right. Reduced sharp little bit more:
1 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b.../q1349444972.2349img_1176-4-18.jpg

Post-screening
Went back to the 1st version and increased Masking and a bit NR.
2 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/q1349443893.7171img_0926-2.jpg

Looks better?

Maybe this v2 firmware for the 7D is getting my photos sharper. I don´t know.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: vikkyvik
Posted 2012-10-05 10:15:28 and read 2812 times.

UA looks a bit soft.

Angola looks soft and a bit noisy.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-05 12:45:05 and read 2801 times.

Thanks for your comments Vik

UA-
It seems I reduced too much. Just reverted to the previous version

Angola
Increased the NR and sharp. There is some distortion around the reg that I´m having some trouble to fix
Do you see the noise all around?
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/o1349465458.4385img_0926-5.jpg

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: vikkyvik
Posted 2012-10-05 14:40:37 and read 2795 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 8):
Do you see the noise all around?

Mostly in the darker areas, like the grey on the bottom of the fuse.

It still looks soft to me - I'm thinking that you're putting in too much NR now. Also looks quite dark overall.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-06 01:52:10 and read 2783 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 8):
Increased the NR and sharp.

I see a slight amount of noise, but as Vik said, softness would be the bigger problem.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-09 03:23:23 and read 2755 times.

Thx Dana

The Angola was at ISO 800 and I´m failing to reduce Noise and Softness at the same time. Maybe it has no solution. I don´t know

Another one.
I would like your comments on this rejection:
http://www.airliners.net/procphotos/...ame=g1348936576.0305img_9502-2.jpg

Quality
Blurry
Over-sharpened
Overexposed

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-09 06:30:41 and read 2745 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 11):
I would like your comments on this rejection:

I would have added color as well, a little too much yellow.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-13 12:53:34 and read 2713 times.

Quoting dlowwa (Reply 12):
I would have added color as well

ok... thats embarrassing. but yes I see your point. I´ll leave that to later.

Pre-screening
Please comment on this one. I like these greys skys but they are tricky.
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/u1349823066.2465img_2358-1.jpg

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Newark727
Posted 2012-10-13 13:22:07 and read 2712 times.

I would say that the tail and reg area is a little overexposed and possibly a little oversharpened, and I think it could stand to be a tick higher in the frame.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: vikkyvik
Posted 2012-10-13 16:07:54 and read 2704 times.

Quoting Newark727 (Reply 14):
possibly a little oversharpened

I actually see it the opposite - I'd probably give the whole thing a slight kick of sharpening.  

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-13 19:42:19 and read 2694 times.

Sharpening & centering look passable, it should be ok.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-14 06:28:38 and read 2671 times.

Thanks guys.

Pre-screening
Keeping in the greys skies theme and pushing it up a level.
I´ve just realize I have one photo of this "K" baby. I thought I had missed it.

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/z1350220824.8365img_2362-3.jpg

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-14 11:53:26 and read 2655 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 17):
I´ve just realize I have one photo of this "K" baby.

Should be ok.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-24 11:16:24 and read 2509 times.

Hello again

Please comment on these two:

Pre-screening

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/f1351102023.3853img_1477-1.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/i1350934669.8323img_0766-2.jpg

Thx in advance

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-24 11:57:50 and read 2503 times.

Not the best light on the second, but both will probably be passable.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-10-31 13:41:45 and read 2467 times.

Hello

Please comment on these ones:

Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/p1351281402.1548img_1454-1.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/l1351714783.3279img_3417-8.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/g1351715988.9629img_2191-2.jpg

Thank you in advance

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-10-31 14:28:12 and read 2461 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 21):
Please comment on these ones:

Just a dust spot on the second; no major issues otherwise.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-01 13:33:00 and read 2451 times.

Hello Dana, spot removed and uploaded.

Now, my first experience indoors in a museum and also with a ultrawide that a fellow visitor lended me there.


Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/p1351800830.6821img_1723-1.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/a1351801384.4878img_1699-2.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/l1351801889.5079img_1676-1.jpg

Thx in advance

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-11-01 14:36:33 and read 2448 times.

Cockpit shot is a bit bright, but otherwise they look ok for quality. For level, try to use the verticals in the center of the frame, and keep in mind for the barrel distortion typical with uwa shots the edges should tilt in equally as much.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-01 16:17:41 and read 2447 times.

ok

Pulled back a little on the 2nd. Is it better?
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...y/k1351810335.7894img_1699-2-3.jpg

For the level,
ajusted on the 1st by the two bars on the top.
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/u1351811148.7638img_1723-2.jpg

the 3rd is leveled by the bar over the captain window. does seem leveled. is it correct?

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-11-01 16:48:00 and read 2442 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 25):
Pulled back a little on the 2nd. Is it better?

Yes.

Quoting Patich (Reply 25):
does seem leveled. is it correct?

I think it needs cw rotation.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-02 12:47:33 and read 2448 times.

Ok thx

So, another go at leveling

DC3
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/o1351884574.3401img_1676-2.jpg

Dornier
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/m1351885445.9961img_1723-3.jpg

Did I get it right?

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-11-02 23:00:13 and read 2437 times.

First should be ok, but second still feels cw.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-03 02:25:05 and read 2433 times.

Ok

Leveling this is revealing more complicated than I thought.

Now I leveled by the vertical bars between the blue column and the aircraft.
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...eady/q1351934310.333img_1723-4.jpg

And this one got rejected:

Post-Screening
http://www.airliners.net/procphotos/...ame=f1351102023.3853img_1477-1.jpg
Over-sharpened
Overexposed

Thanks
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dazbo5
Posted 2012-11-03 02:35:22 and read 2431 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 29):
Now I leveled by the vertical bars between the blue column and the aircraft.


Museum photography and wide angle lenses are inherently difficult when it comes to levelling. As a rule of thumb, always level using a vertical in the centre of the frame. This averages any barrel distortion. There are plenty of verticals in the background on the window frames so I'd have used those as reference. Having said that, it's what looks right in the end that matters. I get the feel it needs a little more CW rotation. I'd probably give is a little extra sharpening as well.

Quoting Patich (Reply 29):
Over-sharpened
Overexposed


It is a little sharp on my screen, the cheat lines are very jagged. You may need to selectively sharpen the aircraft and not sharpen the cheat lines. For me, it's not overexposed, that rejection reason is a little misleading. It's just a little too bright for this site. Reduce the exposure a little and you should be fine.

Darren

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-17 14:32:36 and read 2415 times.

Hello guys

Today I´ve tried something different. Comments please

Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/m1353191191.1619img_2265-2.jpg

Thanks
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: gonzalu
Posted 2012-11-18 18:29:29 and read 2414 times.

What happened to the wheels? How are they hidden by the background grass? Or is the runway not actually the one in front?

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-11-18 19:23:28 and read 2414 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 31):
Today I´ve tried something different. Comments please

Not sure what is different about it, but the missing wheels will be an issue, as it was avoidable, and it is oversharpened.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-19 01:39:21 and read 2412 times.

I should have been more specific in my previous post. You are both right. Sorry for that.

The difference in the photo was the lower speed, but with the wheels issue I´ll scrap this one.

Thanks

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-24 12:02:16 and read 2379 times.

Hello

I would like your opinion on this photo in general and, for future reference, if the aircraft is allowed to be offcenter to the left because of the follow-me

Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/z1353786949.2103img_2532-1.jpg

Thanks
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-11-25 02:00:03 and read 2360 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 35):
I would like your opinion on this photo

Centering should be ok, but there are exposure (high) and contrast (low) issues.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-25 11:48:08 and read 2354 times.

Ok Dana

Made some corrections on exposure and contrast.
Did I get it right??

Pre-scennning
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/o1353872665.6504img_2532-2.jpg

Thx again
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-11-25 14:09:36 and read 2347 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 37):
Made some corrections on exposure and contrast.
Did I get it right??

Better, but the light is still pretty poor.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-11-25 14:44:46 and read 2347 times.

One last try.
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/g1353882933.6681img_2532-3.jpg

Maybe I´m aiming too high with this one.

Thx
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-11-26 01:42:01 and read 2331 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 39):
One last try.

As above. Better than the first, but the light is quite poor.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-12-08 13:38:22 and read 2182 times.

Hello

I would like your comments on this one.
I like it because of the condesation in the engine, but the sun was high and in front.
Does it stand a chance? (and do you see it oversharped?)

Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...dy/t1355002296.8976img_2914-02.jpg

Thanks
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-12-09 02:35:57 and read 2169 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 41):
Does it stand a chance? (and do you see it oversharped?)

Sharpening seems ok, but look a little flat & noisy.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-12-13 12:57:32 and read 2123 times.

Hello,

Made another edit to the Angola to correct contrast anf NR.

Is it ok?

Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/x1355432046.9565img_2914-2.jpg

Thx again
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-12-13 17:07:12 and read 2107 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 43):
Is it ok?

Should be passable.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-12-23 05:55:54 and read 2019 times.

Hello

Happy hollidays to all.

I need your opinion on this one.
It´s another try on low shutter speed photo

Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/c1356270810.3088img_3829-1.jpg

Thx
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-12-24 01:32:46 and read 1994 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 45):
It´s another try on low shutter speed photo

Sorry, more than a few severe problems with this one.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2012-12-31 10:14:37 and read 1960 times.

Hello

Wish you all a happy new year with everything you desire.

Quoting dlowwa (Reply 46):
Sorry, more than a few severe problems with this one.

Lets just forget I showed you that one, ok...?

Now I need help with this one:

Post-screening
- Level (no cw or ccw mention)
http://www.airliners.net/procphotos/...ame=j1356293798.3381img_0732-1.jpg

I zoomed the photo and the edges of the houses seem ok.

Thx
And again a happy 2013

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2012-12-31 15:34:21 and read 1953 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 47):
Post-screening
- Level

Looks like it needs a little cw.

Quoting Patich (Reply 47):
(no cw or ccw mention)

Sorry about that. I'll try and remind the screener he should be leaving personal messages with level rejections.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-01-03 13:27:38 and read 1938 times.

Hello again

I would like your opinion on this one.
I can´t say i´m happy with this edit but i´m failing to see where to improve.

This was yesterday and was a huge, really huge, surprise as Condor don´t fly here to Lisbon. It was a medical emergency almost at lunch time with a very high sun.

Pre-screening:
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/a1357247573.2096img_4225-1.jpg

Thx
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2013-01-03 16:03:23 and read 1931 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 49):
I would like your opinion on this one.

A bit dark/noisy, but probably passable as is.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-01-20 05:31:15 and read 1816 times.

Hello.

Would like your opinion on these:

Post-screening:
1)Tui:
Grainy
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r...115_i1357476852.2805img_3586-2.jpg

Made this new edit, but I´m afraid to make it soft:
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/j1358687820.9938img_3586-3.jpg


2)heli:
Dark
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r...0115_n1357510395.528img_4394-2.jpg

Made this new edit but I'm concerned about the nose:
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...eady/m1358688506.573img_4394-3.jpg

Thx
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: DL747
Posted 2013-01-20 11:42:29 and read 1810 times.

With the first, I really don't see that much of a difference, to be honest. The second looks a bit less noisy in the sky, so it is better, but really not too big of a differnece. The second looks partially backlit or nose lit, and so therefore the nose is far brighter than the tail. The nose is close to blown out, but the tail still looks dark to me. It may not be fixable.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-02-16 09:30:57 and read 1617 times.

Hello

Would like your opinion on this one:

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ready/f1361035413.96img_5549-1.jpg

My concerns contrast and sharp

Thx
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dazbo5
Posted 2013-02-16 09:39:08 and read 1614 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 53):
My concerns contrast and sharp

It looks oversharp on my screen.

Darren

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-02-16 11:18:41 and read 1601 times.

OK

Made another edit

Still OS?

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/k1361038187.6741img_5549-2.jpg

Thx
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dazbo5
Posted 2013-02-16 11:31:26 and read 1598 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 55):
Still OS?

That looks better on my screen now.

Darren

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-03-12 12:59:11 and read 1375 times.

Hello,

Would like your opinion on this one I took sunday.

Does it look OS to you? I'm not sure about those front letters

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...eady/z1363117913.359img_6488-1.jpg

Thanks in advance
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2013-03-13 02:53:30 and read 1344 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 57):
Does it look OS to you? I'm not sure about those front letters

No, actually a touch soft and noisy in the sky. Should be fixable.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-03-13 12:35:07 and read 1331 times.

OK Dana

New edit. Is it better?

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...dy/n1363203247.1312img_6488-02.jpg

Thanks again
Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2013-03-13 14:50:18 and read 1322 times.

Again, maybe a touch soft toward the front, but otherwise quality looks ok.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-03-21 12:29:08 and read 1240 times.

Dana, hello again

Got rejected

Post-screening:
Overexposed: "Body of AC is overexposed."
http://www.airliners.net/procphotos/...ame=w1363212442.2038img_6488-3.jpg

Is this right or worth appeal?

Bruno

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: dlowwa
Posted 2013-03-21 23:42:54 and read 1211 times.

Quoting Patich (Reply 61):
Is this right or worth appeal?

It should have a good chance at appeal.

Topic: RE: Pre And Post Screening (Patich)
Username: Patich
Posted 2013-12-25 14:09:27 and read 331 times.

Hello,

After many months without uploading photos, here I´m again.

In between I´ve change my editing software, so I´ve kind of lost my references.

Need your help

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...dy/b1388008406.7207img_0339-01.jpg

Your opinion, please.

Thank you in advance.


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