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User currently offlinekl692 From Canada, joined Feb 2006, 676 posts, RR: 0
Posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 2 days 14 hours ago) and read 346 times:

Hello All, stay up all night editing the pictures below. Now I know not all will be good enough but your feed backs will help me make those that aren't good enough better. Thanks.




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User currently offlinedazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2913 posts, RR: 2
Reply 1, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 2 days 11 hours ago) and read 329 times:

Quoting kl692 (Thread starter):
Now I know not all will be good enough but your feed backs will help me make those that aren't good enough better. Thanks.

To be honest, most of them have issues with noise, oversharprning, level, centre (low mainly), soft, blurry, motive, pool lighting, to name but a few. The only ones that's close is No4 really.

Darren



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User currently offlineMaximLezin From Canada, joined Jun 2011, 360 posts, RR: 0
Reply 2, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 2 days 10 hours ago) and read 326 times:

Hey KL692, its Max, the guy you spotted with!

Fundamentally these are actually extremely well executed shots, that pack good quality as well as motive. In terms of the editing, try not to oversharpen some, and use selective sharpening like I told you. This will help reduce noise, and tastefully increase sharpness, and not compromise quality. There are lots of videos on youtube like this one;

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TcT8fJTejcM

Also when using a sharpening mask use something like 50,0.5,1. Usually does the trick for me.  

Now, in terms of lighting, the only major issue with that, would be with the 23 overhead shots, They are just a tad dark.

http://i1231.photobucket.com/albums/ee510/SKY005/31.jpg

Thats the same westjet we got. Dana Low told me the only issues possible with that one were; level, haze, and centering. So I guess you can use it as a guideline for sharpening. Anyways, good luck, believe me you have mostly very nice shots, and I d say most of them would in fact get in with some good editing. Cya, and good luck!

[Edited 2012-04-08 08:25:23]

[Edited 2012-04-08 08:26:02]

User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7328 posts, RR: 30
Reply 3, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 2 days 8 hours ago) and read 305 times:

As Darren has said, these would all be rejected for a variety of reasons. If you would like more specific critique, why don't you pick just a couple to focus on.

User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 10035 posts, RR: 26
Reply 4, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 2 days 5 hours ago) and read 292 times:
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Something else to note is that you've resized a few of the photos incorrectly, so that they are warped slightly (#3, and the last two are the ones I noticed, though I didn't look through them all). Those 3 photos all look like they've been stretched vertically (or shrunk horizontally).


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User currently offlinekl692 From Canada, joined Feb 2006, 676 posts, RR: 0
Reply 5, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 1 day 18 hours ago) and read 273 times:

Hello all, how about this?




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User currently offlinekl692 From Canada, joined Feb 2006, 676 posts, RR: 0
Reply 6, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 1 day 17 hours ago) and read 269 times:

or this one




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User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 10035 posts, RR: 26
Reply 7, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 1 day 10 hours ago) and read 254 times:
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Quoting kl692 (Reply 5):
Quoting kl692 (Reply 6):

Those appear to be the same photo, just processed differently.

Either way, it's too distant, and would probably be a motive rejection for the landing gear being blocked.



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User currently offlinekl692 From Canada, joined Feb 2006, 676 posts, RR: 0
Reply 8, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 1 day 8 hours ago) and read 250 times:

Quoting vikkyvik (Reply 7):

they both are the same image, I was trying different editing. besides the landing gear problem, is there anything wrong with them.



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User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 10035 posts, RR: 26
Reply 9, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 1 day 7 hours ago) and read 248 times:
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Quoting kl692 (Reply 8):
besides the landing gear problem, is there anything wrong with them.
Quoting vikkyvik (Reply 7):
it's too distant

Also, the 2nd one is dark, and color looks a bit weird on both - maybe too yellow/red?



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User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7328 posts, RR: 30
Reply 10, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 1 day 7 hours ago) and read 246 times:

Quoting kl692 (Reply 8):
besides the landing gear problem, is there anything wrong with them.

Not sure what the value of commenting on the quality is when it's an instant motive rejection, but you would need to crop it tighter before such assessments could be made anyway.


User currently offlinekl692 From Canada, joined Feb 2006, 676 posts, RR: 0
Reply 11, posted (2 years 5 months 2 weeks 1 day 6 hours ago) and read 243 times:

Quoting vikkyvik (Reply 9):
Also, the 2nd one is dark, and color looks a bit weird on both - maybe too yellow/red?

The picture was taking when the sun was setting, I am not sure if that is why the color is off. but anyhow this pic is also no go due to movtive



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