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User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Posted (2 years 2 weeks 4 hours ago) and read 1446 times:

Hi guys, this is the first time that I have been out shooting in quite a few months. may I please get feedback on these 3 shots?

Thanks  http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/...tion=view&current=DSC_0894copy.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0903.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/...tion=view&current=DSC_0923copy.jpg

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User currently offlinedazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2898 posts, RR: 2
Reply 1, posted (2 years 2 weeks 2 hours ago) and read 1429 times:

Quoting evall95 (Thread starter):
may I please get feedback on these 3 shots?

The Saab 340 looks a little soft on my screen, maybe through heat haze? The dimensions are a little out (too much height).
The Vigin's dimensions are as above, but looks ok other than that on my screen.
The Qantas is a little noisey and low in the frame.

Darren



Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offlinemjgbtv From United States of America, joined Jan 2008, 843 posts, RR: 0
Reply 2, posted (2 years 1 week 6 days 21 hours ago) and read 1406 times:

Looks like the Qantas needs some CCW rotation also?

Marty


User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7328 posts, RR: 30
Reply 3, posted (2 years 1 week 6 days 8 hours ago) and read 1380 times:
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First two are ok, second is quite soft and probably not fixable.

Quoting dazbo5 (Reply 1):
The dimensions are a little out (too much height).

The size is within the allowable range, so that is not an issue.

Quoting mjgbtv (Reply 2):
Looks like the Qantas needs some CCW rotation also?

The poor quality makes the level a moot point.


User currently offlinedazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2898 posts, RR: 2
Reply 5, posted (2 years 1 day 3 hours ago) and read 1304 times:

Quoting evall95 (Reply 4):
may I please get some feedback for these shots?

Are any of those edited for upload? Or do you just want feedback? All have issues such as levelleling and sharpness as well as other issues for here.

Darren



Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 6, posted (2 years 23 hours ago) and read 1298 times:

No they are not edited, just cropped and resized. just wanted to know how they were unedited since it was the first time that I used the lens. If anyone was interested I shot in Aperture Priority at F8.

User currently offlinedazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2898 posts, RR: 2
Reply 7, posted (2 years 19 hours ago) and read 1291 times:

[quote=evall95,reply=6]No they are not edited, just cropped and resized. just wanted to know how they were unedited since it was the first time that I used the lens.[quote]
Ok, I was thinking they can't have been edited! The first is maybe a little 'hot' for here so faces an overexposed rejection, but looks ok on my screen otherwise. The second looks quite soft, possibly heat hazed? I like the third composition wise although I think the main subject needs to be slightly lower in the frame. It looks like there's heat haze though and jet wash on the tail. The fourth might be ok quality wise with a good edit, although there apears to be some heat haze. I think the main problem with this one is the grass blocking the landing gear. The fifth looks ok quality wise but I'm not sure of the composition, it feels a little awkward to me cropped just behind the winglet. The composition on the last one looks better to my eyes including the whole of the wing, assuming you crop closer to the nose. It's a little 'hot' though and would probably get an overexposed rejection here as it is.

Darren



Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 9897 posts, RR: 26
Reply 8, posted (2 years 10 hours ago) and read 1273 times:
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Quoting evall95 (Reply 6):
No they are not edited, just cropped and resized. just wanted to know how they were unedited since it was the first time that I used the lens. If anyone was interested I shot in Aperture Priority at F8.

In my opinion, it's pretty useless to comment on resized, but unedited, photos. Can't tell how the quality of the full-size photo is, and can't tell how the quality of a fully-edited photo is.

Why not just edit a few of them and post them? Or if you want comments on the originals, post those at their full size.



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User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 9, posted (2 years 3 hours ago) and read 1263 times:

Thanks Darren and Vik for your help. I have fixed up the photos and uploaded them. May I get some feedback on these shots that have been FULLY edited to the best of my ability. By the way guys sorry if I am posting many shots at once but I have not been out shooting for months so I just wanted to make sure that i'm editing properly again.

Thanks  http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0101.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0113.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0133.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0145.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0156.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0170.jpg


User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 10, posted (1 year 12 months 4 days 3 hours ago) and read 1243 times:

Are any of the shots above ready to go or do they all need better edits?

Thanks  


User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 9897 posts, RR: 26
Reply 11, posted (1 year 12 months 4 days 3 hours ago) and read 1242 times:
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1.) Looks soft.
2.) I would crop in a bit closer, but otherwise looks OK to me.
3.) Same here - crop is a bit loose. Will be easier to tell with a tighter crop, but looks heat-hazed to me. Also may need a tiny bit of CCW.
4.) Looks OK to me, except for what looks like a dust spot in the sky (not sure if it's a cloud, but doesn't look like it to me). It's about halfway up the sky, 1/4 in from the right.
5.) Same as #2, and also looks a bit noisy.
6.) Looks a touch soft. Heat haze may be at play again.



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User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 12, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 5 days 1 hour ago) and read 1192 times:

Would I be able to get some feedback on these two shots? I would love to get the first one up.

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0191.jpg

http://s1246.photobucket.com/albums/.../?action=view&current=DSC_0187.jpg

Thanks  


User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 13, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 4 days 3 hours ago) and read 1163 times:

Taking a second look I believe that the first one is fine to upload. Am I correct?

User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 9897 posts, RR: 26
Reply 14, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 4 days 2 hours ago) and read 1160 times:
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1.) Nice shot, but looks a bit noisy in the sky and the darker areas and slightly high in the frame.
2.) Looks fine to me.



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User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 15, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 3 days 23 hours ago) and read 1154 times:

Thanks Vik. For many months now if I have someone tell me that a shot is noisy I just leave it because I do not now how to remove noise from photos. I use PS5, would you be able to teach me how to remove noise from shots?

Thanks  


User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 16, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 2 days 6 hours ago) and read 1124 times:

I have figured out how to reduce noise now. could I please have feedback on the following photo?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...904158322/in/photostream/lightbox/

Thanks  


User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 17, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 1 day 21 hours ago) and read 1118 times:

Hi just had this shot done for grainy and over sharpened and I must say I do agree with the rejection. Does this edit look better?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...905940440/in/photostream/lightbox/

Thanks  


User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 18, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 4 hours ago) and read 1099 times:

May I please have some feedback on this shot and the shots above. Thanks  http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...919362826/in/photostream/lightbox/

User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 9897 posts, RR: 26
Reply 19, posted (1 year 11 months 3 weeks 3 hours ago) and read 1097 times:
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Quoting evall95 (Reply 16):
I have figured out how to reduce noise now. could I please have feedback on the following photo?

Soft, flat, and the quality in general doesn't look too good. Did you use a lot of NR?

Quoting evall95 (Reply 17):
Hi just had this shot done for grainy and over sharpened and I must say I do agree with the rejection. Does this edit look better?

Looks soft and oversharpened in parts. Not sure if it's heat haze or too much NR.

Quoting evall95 (Reply 18):
May I please have some feedback on this shot and the shots above

Looks soft and flat to me. Again, maybe too much NR?



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User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 20, posted (1 year 11 months 2 weeks 6 days 8 hours ago) and read 1075 times:

Thanks Vik. Of course I finally find out how to reduce noise and then over do it, haha. I tried to re-edit the photos. Do they look any better?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...926656934/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...926657662/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...926656228/in/photostream/lightbox/

Thanks  


User currently offlinedazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2898 posts, RR: 2
Reply 21, posted (1 year 11 months 2 weeks 6 days 2 hours ago) and read 1069 times:

Quoting evall95 (Reply 20):
Do they look any better?

They all look over-processed and oversharp on my screen like too much noise reduction has been applied.

Darren



Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 22, posted (1 year 11 months 2 weeks 5 days ago) and read 1053 times:

Hi all, have gone back to the original copies of the photos and re editing them only using half of the NR. Plus I added another shot. How do these look?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...936010104/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...936010938/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/64507924@N04/7936009648/in/photostream

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...936010464/in/photostream/lightbox/

Thanks  


User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 23, posted (1 year 11 months 2 weeks 21 hours ago) and read 1011 times:

I had this shot rejected for grain, dark, contrast and centered.

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r...20909_h1346471432.6409dsc_0191.jpg

this is the new edit.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...962136732/in/photostream/lightbox/

May I please have some feedback for the other shots in the last post?

Thanks  


User currently offlinedazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2898 posts, RR: 2
Reply 24, posted (1 year 11 months 2 weeks 20 hours ago) and read 1005 times:

Quoting evall95 (Reply 23):
this is the new edit.

It's still too high in the frame, but contrast and brightness look better on my screen. I must say I'm struggling to see any noise issues with the rejected version.

Quoting evall95 (Reply 23):
May I please have some feedback for the other shots in the last post?

1. It looks oversharp on my screen, and may have too much dead space for here.
2. It looks like it needs some CW rotation and needs to be cropped closer to the aircraft.
3. There a small amount of visible noise in the sky and I'd say it needs some CW rotation.
4. There's too much dead space around the aircraft, in needs cropping a little closer and may get a dark rejection even though it was taken in low light.

Darren



Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 25, posted (1 year 11 months 1 week 6 days 23 hours ago) and read 984 times:

May have feedback on the following photos. I would love to get the first one accepted but am unsure what is needed in those types of shots.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...970005128/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...970005604/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...970006070/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...970006580/in/photostream/lightbox/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/6450792...970007134/in/photostream/lightbox/

Thanks  


User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 9897 posts, RR: 26
Reply 26, posted (1 year 11 months 1 week 6 days 19 hours ago) and read 984 times:
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1.) Nice shot, but next time I would tilt the camera up more. No need for the large black area in the bottom quarter of the photo. I think it would be a motive reject (also soft).

2.) Looks slightly heat hazed.

3.) Looks OK to me. Maybe a bit soft toward the tail.

4.) Looks slightly soft to me. Maybe heat haze again.

5.) A bit dark. There aren't really any good references for level, but my instinct would be a bit of CCW level.



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User currently offlineevall95 From Australia, joined Aug 2011, 306 posts, RR: 0
Reply 28, posted (1 year 11 months 1 week 11 hours ago) and read 938 times:

Any recommendations for the photos above?

Thanks  


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