LOCsta From United States of America, joined Sep 2006, 306 posts, RR: 7
Reply 1, posted (3 years 3 months 1 day 14 hours ago) and read 1078 times:
Is that the original? If so, the cut wing is distracting and throws off the balance. Would need to do a tight crop (maybe portrait) and that results in a lot of the image being lost, thus lessening the impact of all those planes.
Too bad, as its a really cool scene.
Motive/framing is not the main issue here. You have had two different versions of this image rejected. If you wanted to get it accepted, you should address the problems listed with the rejections you have received - soft/quality for the first version submitted, and color for the second. Unfortunately if the original is only 1024 pixels, there is not a lot to work with.