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User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Posted (8 months 2 weeks 4 days 3 hours ago) and read 2307 times:

Hello

I've just submitted this one:

1 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/w1349301897.8369img_1257-1.jpg

2 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...eady/r1349303336.986img_1222-1.jpg


Would like your feedback about it and it´s chances of acceptance.

Thx

[Edited 2012-10-03 15:30:21]

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User currently offlinedazbo5 From United Kingdom, joined Mar 2005, 2601 posts, RR: 2
Reply 1, posted (8 months 2 weeks 4 days 2 hours ago) and read 2299 times:

Quoting Patich (Thread starter):
Would like your feedback about it and it´s chances of acceptance.

1. This looks oversharp on my screen towards the rear of the aircraft while the nose looks a little soft.
2. Possibly a little heat hazed and oversharp trying to compensate for it?

Darren


Equipment: 2x Canon EOS 50D; Sigma 10-20 EX DC HSM, 50-500 EX APO DG, Canon 24-105 f/4 L, Speedlite 430EX
User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 2, posted (8 months 2 weeks 4 days 1 hour ago) and read 2290 times:
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Agree with Darren both slightly os, but I think should be passable

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 3, posted (8 months 2 weeks 3 days 6 hours ago) and read 2247 times:

Thank you both for your inputs and glad that you think they are passable.

Photo 1 has no sharp added, except the export sharp.

Photo 2 had just a little bit, but way less then what I used to use.

Something definitly changed with my photos this couple of months to be nedding no sharp.

[Edited 2012-10-04 13:00:13]

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 4, posted (8 months 2 weeks 2 days 14 hours ago) and read 2217 times:

Hello

Please comment on these two. One is a pre-screening and the other a post-screening

Pre-screening:
Following the OS issue I had, this one is the first time i use the sharp slider to the left.
1 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b.../q1349386153.6948img_1176-1-24.jpg

Post- screening:
Rejected by Grainy and Category "Not dark category"
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r...001_k1348264662.4461img_0926-3.jpg

Changed the NR, Masking and a little twick on the exposure. However I still have a doubt: Should the Dark category be selected, as the photo was taken after the sunset?
2 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/a1349433919.6988img_0926-1.jpg

[Edited 2012-10-05 03:59:59]

[Edited 2012-10-05 04:00:22]

User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 5, posted (8 months 2 weeks 2 days 12 hours ago) and read 2205 times:
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Quoting Patich (Reply 4):
Pre-screening:

Still a touch os, but might be passable.

Quoting Patich (Reply 4):
Post- screening:

If the sun was below the horizon, then 'Dark' was the correct category to select. New version looks a bit dark/soft.

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 6, posted (8 months 2 weeks 2 days 11 hours ago) and read 2203 times:

Thanks Dana

Pre-screening:
Trying to get it right. Reduced sharp little bit more:
1 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b.../q1349444972.2349img_1176-4-18.jpg

Post-screening
Went back to the 1st version and increased Masking and a bit NR.
2 - http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/q1349443893.7171img_0926-2.jpg

Looks better?

Maybe this v2 firmware for the 7D is getting my photos sharper. I don´t know.

User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 8313 posts, RR: 28
Reply 7, posted (8 months 2 weeks 2 days 8 hours ago) and read 2193 times:
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UA looks a bit soft.

Angola looks soft and a bit noisy.


"Two and a Half Men" was filmed in front of a live ostrich.
User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 8, posted (8 months 2 weeks 2 days 5 hours ago) and read 2182 times:

Thanks for your comments Vik

UA-
It seems I reduced too much. Just reverted to the previous version

Angola
Increased the NR and sharp. There is some distortion around the reg that I´m having some trouble to fix
Do you see the noise all around?
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/o1349465458.4385img_0926-5.jpg

Bruno

User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 8313 posts, RR: 28
Reply 9, posted (8 months 2 weeks 2 days 3 hours ago) and read 2176 times:
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Quoting Patich (Reply 8):
Do you see the noise all around?

Mostly in the darker areas, like the grey on the bottom of the fuse.

It still looks soft to me - I'm thinking that you're putting in too much NR now. Also looks quite dark overall.


"Two and a Half Men" was filmed in front of a live ostrich.
User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 10, posted (8 months 2 weeks 1 day 16 hours ago) and read 2164 times:
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Quoting Patich (Reply 8):
Increased the NR and sharp.

I see a slight amount of noise, but as Vik said, softness would be the bigger problem.

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 11, posted (8 months 1 week 5 days 15 hours ago) and read 2136 times:

Thx Dana

The Angola was at ISO 800 and I´m failing to reduce Noise and Softness at the same time. Maybe it has no solution. I don´t know

Another one.
I would like your comments on this rejection:
http://www.airliners.net/procphotos/...ame=g1348936576.0305img_9502-2.jpg

Quality
Blurry
Over-sharpened
Overexposed

User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 12, posted (8 months 1 week 5 days 12 hours ago) and read 2126 times:
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Quoting Patich (Reply 11):
I would like your comments on this rejection:

I would have added color as well, a little too much yellow.

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 13, posted (8 months 1 week 1 day 5 hours ago) and read 2094 times:

Quoting dlowwa (Reply 12):
I would have added color as well

ok... thats embarrassing. but yes I see your point. I´ll leave that to later.

Pre-screening
Please comment on this one. I like these greys skys but they are tricky.
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/u1349823066.2465img_2358-1.jpg

Bruno

User currently offlineNewark727 From United States of America, joined Dec 2009, 1192 posts, RR: 0
Reply 14, posted (8 months 1 week 1 day 5 hours ago) and read 2093 times:

I would say that the tail and reg area is a little overexposed and possibly a little oversharpened, and I think it could stand to be a tick higher in the frame.

User currently offlinevikkyvik From United States of America, joined Jul 2003, 8313 posts, RR: 28
Reply 15, posted (8 months 1 week 1 day 2 hours ago) and read 2085 times:
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Quoting Newark727 (Reply 14):
possibly a little oversharpened

I actually see it the opposite - I'd probably give the whole thing a slight kick of sharpening.  


"Two and a Half Men" was filmed in front of a live ostrich.
User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 16, posted (8 months 1 week 22 hours ago) and read 2075 times:
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Sharpening & centering look passable, it should be ok.

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 17, posted (8 months 1 week 12 hours ago) and read 2052 times:

Thanks guys.

Pre-screening
Keeping in the greys skies theme and pushing it up a level.
I´ve just realize I have one photo of this "K" baby. I thought I had missed it.

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/z1350220824.8365img_2362-3.jpg

Bruno

User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 18, posted (8 months 1 week 6 hours ago) and read 2036 times:
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Quoting Patich (Reply 17):
I´ve just realize I have one photo of this "K" baby.

Should be ok.

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 19, posted (7 months 3 weeks 6 days 7 hours ago) and read 1890 times:

Hello again

Please comment on these two:

Pre-screening

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/f1351102023.3853img_1477-1.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/i1350934669.8323img_0766-2.jpg

Thx in advance

User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 20, posted (7 months 3 weeks 6 days 6 hours ago) and read 1884 times:
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Not the best light on the second, but both will probably be passable.

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 21, posted (7 months 2 weeks 6 days 4 hours ago) and read 1848 times:

Hello

Please comment on these ones:

Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/p1351281402.1548img_1454-1.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/l1351714783.3279img_3417-8.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/g1351715988.9629img_2191-2.jpg

Thank you in advance

Bruno

User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 22, posted (7 months 2 weeks 6 days 4 hours ago) and read 1842 times:
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Quoting Patich (Reply 21):
Please comment on these ones:

Just a dust spot on the second; no major issues otherwise.

User currently offlinePatich From Portugal, joined Apr 2011, 35 posts, RR: 0
Reply 23, posted (7 months 2 weeks 5 days 5 hours ago) and read 1832 times:

Hello Dana, spot removed and uploaded.

Now, my first experience indoors in a museum and also with a ultrawide that a fellow visitor lended me there.


Pre-screening
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/p1351800830.6821img_1723-1.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/a1351801384.4878img_1699-2.jpg

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/l1351801889.5079img_1676-1.jpg

Thx in advance

Bruno

User currently offlinedlowwa From Canada, joined Apr 2005, 7317 posts, RR: 31
Reply 24, posted (7 months 2 weeks 5 days 3 hours ago) and read 1829 times:
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Cockpit shot is a bit bright, but otherwise they look ok for quality. For level, try to use the verticals in the center of the frame, and keep in mind for the barrel distortion typical with uwa shots the edges should tilt in equally as much.

25 Post contains links Patich: ok Pulled back a little on the 2nd. Is it better? http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...y/k1351810335.7894img_1699-2-3.jpg For the level, ajusted on
26 dlowwa: Yes. I think it needs cw rotation.
27 Post contains links Patich: Ok thx So, another go at leveling DC3 http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/o1351884574.3401img_1676-2.jpg Dornier http://www.airliners.net/addph
28 dlowwa: First should be ok, but second still feels cw.
29 Post contains links Patich: Ok Leveling this is revealing more complicated than I thought. Now I leveled by the vertical bars between the blue column and the aircraft. http://www
30 dazbo5: Museum photography and wide angle lenses are inherently difficult when it comes to levelling. As a rule of thumb, always level using a vertical in th
31 Post contains links Patich: Hello guys Today I´ve tried something different. Comments please Pre-screening http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/m1353191191.1619img_2265-2.
32 gonzalu: What happened to the wheels? How are they hidden by the background grass? Or is the runway not actually the one in front?
33 dlowwa: Not sure what is different about it, but the missing wheels will be an issue, as it was avoidable, and it is oversharpened.
34 Patich: I should have been more specific in my previous post. You are both right. Sorry for that. The difference in the photo was the lower speed, but with th
35 Post contains links Patich: Hello I would like your opinion on this photo in general and, for future reference, if the aircraft is allowed to be offcenter to the left because of
36 dlowwa: Centering should be ok, but there are exposure (high) and contrast (low) issues.
37 Post contains links Patich: Ok Dana Made some corrections on exposure and contrast. Did I get it right?? Pre-scennning http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/o1353872665.6504
38 dlowwa: Better, but the light is still pretty poor.
39 Post contains links Patich: One last try. http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/g1353882933.6681img_2532-3.jpg Maybe I´m aiming too high with this one. Thx Bruno
40 dlowwa: As above. Better than the first, but the light is quite poor.
41 Post contains links Patich: Hello I would like your comments on this one. I like it because of the condesation in the engine, but the sun was high and in front. Does it stand a c
42 dlowwa: Sharpening seems ok, but look a little flat & noisy.
43 Post contains links Patich: Hello, Made another edit to the Angola to correct contrast anf NR. Is it ok? Pre-screening http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/x1355432046.9565
44 dlowwa: Should be passable.
45 Post contains links Patich: Hello Happy hollidays to all. I need your opinion on this one. It´s another try on low shutter speed photo Pre-screening http://www.airliners.net/add
46 dlowwa: Sorry, more than a few severe problems with this one.
47 Post contains links Patich: Hello Wish you all a happy new year with everything you desire. Lets just forget I showed you that one, ok...? Now I need help with this one: Post-scr
48 dlowwa: Looks like it needs a little cw. Sorry about that. I'll try and remind the screener he should be leaving personal messages with level rejections.
49 Post contains links Patich: Hello again I would like your opinion on this one. I can´t say i´m happy with this edit but i´m failing to see where to improve. This was yesterday
50 dlowwa: A bit dark/noisy, but probably passable as is.
51 Post contains links Patich: Hello. Would like your opinion on these: Post-screening: 1)Tui: Grainy http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r...115_i1357476852.2805img_3586-2.jpg Made
52 DL747: With the first, I really don't see that much of a difference, to be honest. The second looks a bit less noisy in the sky, so it is better, but really
53 Post contains links Patich: Hello Would like your opinion on this one: http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ready/f1361035413.96img_5549-1.jpg My concerns contrast and sharp Th
54 dazbo5: It looks oversharp on my screen. Darren
55 Post contains links Patich: OK Made another edit Still OS? http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...ady/k1361038187.6741img_5549-2.jpg Thx Bruno
56 dazbo5: That looks better on my screen now. Darren
57 Post contains links Patich: Hello, Would like your opinion on this one I took sunday. Does it look OS to you? I'm not sure about those front letters http://www.airliners.net/addp
58 dlowwa: No, actually a touch soft and noisy in the sky. Should be fixable.
59 Post contains links Patich: OK Dana New edit. Is it better? http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...dy/n1363203247.1312img_6488-02.jpg Thanks again Bruno
60 dlowwa: Again, maybe a touch soft toward the front, but otherwise quality looks ok.
61 Post contains links Patich: Dana, hello again Got rejected Post-screening: Overexposed: "Body of AC is overexposed." http://www.airliners.net/procphotos/...ame=w1363212442.2038im
62 dlowwa: It should have a good chance at appeal.
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