wietse
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Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:35 am

Guys,

Could you please have a look at http://www.wietsedegraaf.com/ and tell me what your observations are? How is the speed of it, how is the content, do you like the lay-out and functionality? Any remarks are welcome!

Cheers,
Wietse
Wietse de Graaf
 
VSlover
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:48 am

wow, some truly fantastic work there!

i dont like the font on the primary page. it is too much serif you know? with such a basic (yet tasteful) home page, the font maybe ought to be a bit more simple/smooth.

i like the home page. on the portfolio page, i dont like how one of the links is "about me" where there really ought to just be a text link at the bottom to "about me" as you already have rather than a linked pic.

oh on the about me section, maybe have a separate link through there that links to your equipment.

all in all a brilliant start!
 
wietse
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:53 am

oh on the about me section, maybe have a separate link through there that links to your equipment.

Thanks, look again  Big grin

About the image that leads to "about me" do you think that an empty space would be better there? I just put it there to have something instead of an empty field.

thanks for your comments
Wietse de Graaf
 
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:57 am

I like it. The first page is very simple. That's how it should be. Most of the time, web sites are so cluttered that people don't bother to explore further.

Since your photography is great, and you have a photography based site, why not incorporate one of your photos into the interface to create a strong focal point. Perhaps even use it to further develop a solid color scheme. You never know what you may discover.  Smile
 
Qb001
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:16 am

I used to be a project director in web site production. I've directed the production of monstrous web sites.

The basic design of the screen should follow the rule of the "inverted L", that is the top part of your main screen is for the main areas of the site, and the left hand side is a sub-menu.

Take a look at this site (yep, one of mine). Click on the "About" and "Help" and look how the left-hand side menu reacts. That's an "inverted L" in action and it has been demonstrated to be the most usable Web site design. Also, Verdana is the best font to use.

Now, you do what you want with this advice.
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737doctor
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:41 am

I like it. It has a clean layout, not cluttered. I like the contrast the black background provides. And the photography is excellent.

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F9Widebody
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:07 pm

One thing I would suggest is using a Title, kinda unprofessional imo to have the title be http://www.wietsedegraaf.com. Other than that, it looks great, never knew your photography was of such a wide array of subjects.
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widget1580
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:52 pm

Love the site very easy to navigate. Awesome pictures.

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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 1:15 pm

While you guys are critiquing, if you want to throw any suggestions at my site, http://www.beercraft.net, I'd appreciate it
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LHMark
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:10 pm

Personally, Wietse, I like the serif font you've chosen. It makes the site stand out. Is that Bookman or Garamond?
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Mike777OKC
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:34 pm

great site...cool pics and easy to navigate
 
wietse
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 11:01 pm

Mark,

That is Book Antiqua. Thanks


Everybody else, thank you very much for the comments, I apreciate them.

Cheers
Wietse de Graaf
 
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sat Oct 02, 2004 11:27 pm

Hey, I like the site.

The layout is good as you can nearly always get back to the homepage using the 'Home' link at the bottom. I like the way you used frames to set out the pages but even more so that you actually bothered making another site that uses tables, very thoughtful!

http://home.student.uva.nl/wietse.degraaf

The design is nice too. The black, grey and whites go nice together and you have your titles at the top in a size and font that stands out to the rest of the page. Looks good, as do your smaller titles.

You have some sort of roll over effect for the links as well which isn't too fancy but it's a nice user friendly addition to the site.

A few small things that could do with changing are that on the portfolio home page, the images are a little bit too large. I know you want to keep the quality there but in total all the images add up to 0.5mb (514kb) which isn't great for people with dial-up connections. I even found it a bit slow to load and I have a from of broadband. Try making the total page size be around 100kb, that's the mean size.

Another minor detail is that when you view your large photo's in the portfolio section, say in the aviation category, they don't actually stay in a web page anymore thus they loose any link back to the site unless you hit 'back' in the browser. This is fine I guess but what you could do is either target the photos to open in a new window, resized slightly larger than the actual photo and then insert a close button. This would also give you room for some type of caption.

Another way would be you could keep the photos in the same window as now but place them in a slideshow with html links, such as the one Dreamweaver can make. It makes it a bit easier to navigate about.

Oh and I would also make the 'large' version of the photo's bigger in size. They look like great photos but are only fairly small. Show them off like they deserve to be!

I've kind of yacked on a bit here but you did ask for it, literally!  Laugh out loud

I'm not really that great at web design myself, I know what you are supposed to do, I'm just too lazy to do it hence why my site is in disarray!

Good job on the meta tags and the site in general.
Alex
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asbg
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sun Oct 03, 2004 3:13 am

Hi Wietse,
You have a really nice website. The photos are great, really professional. The only thing that bothers me is the design itself. It's dull in my taste and a bit gothic, somewhat depressing. You were right using a design that blends in with the photos but I would give the background more life.

Keep up the good work.
Sam.

 
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sun Oct 03, 2004 3:15 am

Hey Wietse,
I like the site, and especially the photos.

Here's what I would do differently if were you (which I'm not, so it's all just my personal opinion). I think some of my points have already been mentioned.

1) I'd use a different font, which is basic and thin like Arial Narrow (maybe a little more stretched), it looks more stylish on a black background
Also, fontwise you could distinguish your name a bit from the rest of the site - since you are the brand (the photographer) in that case, just do some experiments with some fonts (depends on how you wanna spell yourself - if you go for 'wietsedegraaf' Haettenschweiler would look cool)

2) If you do Frames on the left, make sure they are always there with the same links. If I click on your photo equipment link for example it changes from 'Home-About Me-Portfolio' to 'Home-Up'. To me that's a bit confusing.

3) If I click on a picture to enlarge, it should be at least 600x450 or 800x600, depending on the resolution your average user has on his/her screen. Another tip: Use a javascript link for the pictures, so you have windows that are the same size as the picture, and don't open in just another IE window with annoying menu bars and a lot of white space around the pictures. Examples can be found on my website www.airlinersite.com such as the Internal / News page and the screenshots in the FS2002 reviews. If you decide to go for that, feel free to copy the javascript commands off the source of these pages, if you have questions I'll be glad to help you.

Keep up the good work  Smile
Lukas
 
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RE: Critique My New Site Please!

Sun Oct 03, 2004 3:16 am

Very professional appearence! Will bookmark it!

Kiwi
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