Korg747
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Does This Music Make You Feel Anything?

Tue Jun 20, 2006 3:02 pm

I've made this song and I really think it's moving but I really tend to think that I'm the only one who thinks that? I'm not looking for praises, I'm looking for you guys to tell me what you feel with this music regardless of your favourit style of music. Does this song make you feel anything at all?

www.myspace.com/sheriefmusic

The first song : God's sad heart

Looking forward to your opinions as I value them alot.
Please excuse my English!
 
rolfen
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RE: Does This Music Make You Feel Anything?

Tue Jun 20, 2006 4:47 pm

That violin sound is not right. There's a lot of potential. But you need to:
- Choose a better sound for the violin, maybe go an octave lower.
- work on the violin melody, there's too much fluctuation and variation and some notes sound wrong.
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RE: Does This Music Make You Feel Anything?

Tue Jun 20, 2006 4:51 pm

Very good!!! But just like Rolfen pointed out, there's something about the violin that doesn't sound right.

I get a little depressed when listening to the song, whether that is good or bad, but it shows that I do get moved by it.

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