IF delta hires people out of school then i think it is my resume. I Think i need to change some things.
Raymond B. Brawley
3311 W 139TH St #6
Hawthorne , CA
Objective: To obtain an entry level position in Aircraft Maintenance, That allows for broadening professional experience and room for growth towards a challenging career.
West Los Angeles Community College
9000 Overland Avenue , Culver City CA
Graduated 18 month Aviation maintenance technician program.
Received Airframe & Power plant certificate.
Los Angeles high school,
4650 w Olympic Blvd, Los Angeles CA
, 90010 .
Attended 9-12 grades from 09/02/2000- 06/31/2004.
Received high school diploma.
5927 w Imperial Highway , Los Angeles CA
Date employed from 09/12/05-present
Basic training in AMT courses maintaining, servicing, and troubleshooting aircrafts from airframe structure repair to corrosive inspection, including riveting , engine overhaul, changing tires and electrical troubleshooting
I think it needs some improving.
Any thoughts would be appreciated .
You guys have anything to add to make it look better?