Hello. I will be transfering to the office at Hannaford and I will be getting to do the closing message over the PA. I always wanted to do that but in my own way and "aviationize" the message. Here is the message: Attention Hannaford Shoppers, We'll be closing in approxmitly X minutes, please bring your items to the front. Have a good night.
I have a rough idea but do you have any ideas to make it aviationize (and not sound dumb? lol I have:
"Attention Hannaford Shoppers. In order to have an on time closing we ask that you please bring your items to the front end. On behalf of the crew here at Hananford we'd thank you for shopping with us. Have a pleasent evening and we look forward to serving you again."