my 2 cents
1.) I think the "outside" world is a little bit overexposed. For example the sky seems to be white.
2.) Looks a bit grainy for me but this could also be because of my cheapo monitor here at work
Hmmmm...so didn't the 1st officer MIND you leaning on his shoulder like that?
MIGHT be accepted. The problem as I see it is the outisde is overexposed and out of focus. And it's the outisde that is the main subject of this pic - the cockpit details serve only to frame it nicely. I think we'll all have to wait and see.