AA 777
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A Little Help Please

Wed Nov 13, 2002 12:09 pm

I got these two photos rejected. The first one I really like (not sure why). Is there any way to help it? The second one was rejected for badmotive. This was the effect that I was trying to get. I think its nice you?

First one-

http://airliners.net/procphotos/rejphoto.main?filename=LANJFKTAXI.jpg

Second one-

http://airliners.net/procphotos/rejphoto.main?filename=738window.jpg

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Matt
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vaman
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RE: A Little Help Please

Wed Nov 13, 2002 12:12 pm

Maybe a little extra USM on the first. I like it. Looks good.


The second one. Hmm.....Try cropping out the window frame on both sides and get a more condensed "i'm looking out the window" feel. I'm no master photographer, but give it a try and see what happens. Leave a little on the left but crop the right!



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RE: A Little Help Please

Wed Nov 13, 2002 12:27 pm

Matt, the first one is not level.

The 2nd one does not show anything of particular interest out the window - pretty mundane clouds.

..and perhaps not sharp enough either.

keep shooting though !!!

Tom
 
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RE: A Little Help Please

Wed Nov 13, 2002 1:26 pm

I really like the first one! (And the jetBlue tails...)

I see you favor the Halmar Customs building.. yeah, well, so do I. Great place.

You know what would be a cool shot? Those airborne express DC9 and DC8 that face eachother? Shoot that through the chainlink.. awesome shot!

Anyway, the second one has some serious noise issues, and I think there is just too much other stuff.

Keep shooting though, they are extrodinary pictures!

JBLU
 
serge
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RE: A Little Help Please

Wed Nov 13, 2002 1:44 pm

Matt, I like the Lan Chile. Just sharpen it up a little bit.

As for the window shot, I would crop it vertical but still it would suffer from being of little interest.  Sad

regards,
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AA 777
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RE: A Little Help Please

Thu Nov 14, 2002 6:49 am

Thanks for the nice words.

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Matt
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RE: A Little Help Please

Thu Nov 14, 2002 8:55 am

Hey Matt, what camera are you using?

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Shawn Patrick
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RE: A Little Help Please

Thu Nov 14, 2002 9:49 am

Looks like an Olympus digital.

What you need to do is adjust levels. If you don't have levels, then push the contrast up a little bit, then sharpen.

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