CallMeCapt
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Worthy Of An Upload?

Fri Jun 17, 2005 7:37 pm

With all the new rules regardin uploading and encouraged self screening, I took this photo at Kingsford Smith today and would like to know if it is worthy of an upload. To me, it looks pretty snazzy, but maybe I'm looking at it with a bit more of an artistic view.
Should i upload?

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ua777222
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RE: Worthy Of An Upload?

Fri Jun 17, 2005 7:40 pm

You'll get slammed for badmotiv for the gear. Just crop lower. I really really really like that shot. Great light!

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RE: Worthy Of An Upload?

Fri Jun 17, 2005 7:43 pm

Wish you hadn't cut off the undercarriage. To me it's a distracting element, being half in and half out. Unless you can recrop to include it, what I would do is try a tighter crop with the bottom edge of the photo somewhere just below the wing trailing edge, i.e. cutting out the main wheels practically completely. Like that, yes I would upload.

Charles
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CallMeCapt
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RE: Worthy Of An Upload?

Fri Jun 17, 2005 8:00 pm

Reworked. Colour is a bit off on this one but I can fix it up. It wasn't level and had no choice but to cut off the gear after levelling.
Better?


[Edited 2005-06-17 13:01:28]
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INNflight
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RE: Worthy Of An Upload?

Fri Jun 17, 2005 8:46 pm

I am afraid like this it is even more badmotive, and badcenter also because there's too much dead space on top.

Still, you said you can't crop it with maingear. Would you want me to give it a try? I'd like to work on it. It's a nice photo.

If you're interested, contact me via my profile.

cheers
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RE: Worthy Of An Upload?

Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:17 pm

Def badmotiv for the gear and those light poles or whatever those things are in the right lower corner. If had let it climb just a little higher and got the gear totally in the shot that could be an awesome pic!
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CallMeCapt
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RE: Worthy Of An Upload?

Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:59 pm

ah well. It was worth a try asking.
Looks like that one will be for the personal photo library.
Thanks anyway people!
Goran
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