To my eye there is something appealing about this shot. That jet efflux against the sunlit cloud is eye-catching.
There is no doubt that it could be vulnerable to a 'dark' rejection, but I would like to know if it could be made to look a bit sharper. I am particularly thinking about the lights on the aircraft, that strip of reflection on the fuselage and the nose area.
If you think I may be able to help just let me know.