airplanenut
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How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:46 am

Just curious what you think of this shot and how it could be improved. I've provided two independent edits, though I think the second edit is better.

FedEx DC-10F pulling out of LAX edit 1

FedEx DC-10F pulling out of LAX edit 2

Thanks,

Jeremy
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jumbojim747
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:51 am

Jeremy sorry to be the one to say this but I'm afraid IMO neither will make it.
They both have the washed out look and maybe brightened too much and a little over exposed.
I'm not saying a new edit wont make it just these at the present stage wont.
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:37 am

They both seem too soft as well. How is the original, I'd like to see it.
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airplanenut
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:48 am

Here's the original:

Original
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flamedude707
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:06 am

The original still lacks the sufficient quality to make it. Did you add alayer of brightness?
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corey07850
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:26 am

I gave it a shot... I don't think the original has the quality to begin with

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y1/corey07850/dc10edit1.jpg
 
JeffM
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:45 am

Quoting Airplanenut (Thread starter):
Just curious what you think of this shot and how it could be improved.

It's soft and overexposed.
How to fix it?
Probably can't.
 
airplanenut
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 2:44 pm

Here's a different shot taken moments after that one... think it's any better?

Another FedEx Shot

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viv
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RE: How Does This Departing FedEx DC10 Look?

Mon Jul 24, 2006 3:35 pm

The original is over-exposed, sorry. There is no fix for that.

Pity, because the softness could probably be fixed.
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