Kukkudrill
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Rejection Advice Needed

Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:52 pm

Dear all,

I need advice on how to fix these. In particular, where are the jaggies? I'm not seeing them on my monitor.

Oversharpened:
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r.../big/20060724_cpol06_3867_1024.jpg

Quality and oversharpened:
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r.../big/20060724_cpol06_3717_1024.jpg

Oversharpened and not centred:
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r.../big/20060720_cpol06_3560_1024.jpg

Thanks,
Charles
Make the most of the available light ... a lesson of photography that applies to life
 
PRM
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RE: Rejection Advice Needed

Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:20 pm

Charles,

Nice shots - I like the Air Malta most. They're all oversharpened on the titles (lettering) and the registrations are jagged, plus around the engines on the TU-154 and the Thomas Cook. Air Malta should be easiest to fix.

Cheers
Paul
 
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RE: Rejection Advice Needed

Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:21 pm

Hi Charles!

1: Titles and reg. oversharpened. Nice shots nontheless!

2: Everything oversharpened - the skies are grainy 'cause of that. Very nice capture!

3: On my screen, it's blurry, pixelated, and oversharpened. I think you should crop to the aircraft, not to the building in the background. That is, 3:2 ratio - crop from the top and a little from the bottom.

Just my  twocents .
 
Kukkudrill
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RE: Rejection Advice Needed

Wed Jul 26, 2006 1:04 am

I love this forum. As soon as you start feeling hard done by, simply post your rejects and you will quickly be reminded that you are still on a learning curve. I've been there 2 years now, and I have no doubt that I'll still be there in 2 years time.

Thanks for the feedback guys. I liked no. 3 as a composition, but it was ever so slightly heat-distorted when seen at full size - I ignored this and I have justly paid the price.  Smile

Charles
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