jcf5002
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Pre-Screen Advice

Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:41 pm

Well here we go again... I've been taking people's advise in my editing and photo selection and think I might have come up with some winners. Take a look, and please tell me if they have a shot. If not, please tell me if there is anything I can do to touch them up. This is about the cream of the crop for me and I appreciate the help. Also, if anyone would like to gander at the originals to give it a go themselves, please feel free to ask or click on the link above the photo. If any screeners read this, please feel free to share what you in particular look for and how a photographer can get on your good side (My acceptance ratio blows at the moment...) E-mail me at jcf5002@psu.edu for private comments/concerns, or your go at the edit. Thanks!

http://www.msprotege.com/members/Fly...Hawaiian/Plane_Photos/PICT0034.jpg
http://www.msprotege.com/members/FlyinHawaiian/Plane_Photos/AA_757_1.1.jpg

http://www.msprotege.com/members/Fly...waiian/Plane_Photos/PICT0054.1.jpg
http://www.msprotege.com/members/FlyinHawaiian/Plane_Photos/PICT0054_1.jpg

http://www.msprotege.com/members/Fly...waiian/Plane_Photos/PICT0059_1.jpg
http://www.msprotege.com/members/FlyinHawaiian/Plane_Photos/PICT0059_2.jpg

-Jeff

[Edited 2006-07-31 06:06:57]
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eddl
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RE: Pre-Screen Advice

Mon Jul 31, 2006 4:57 pm

quality / quality / quality ... nothing you can improve here unfortunately.

Sorry for the bad news,
Phil / EDDL
 
jcf5002
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RE: Pre-Screen Advice

Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:53 am

Quoting EDDL (Reply 1):
quality / quality / quality ... nothing you can improve here unfortunately.

Sorry for the bad news,
Phil / EDDL

Not bad news at all, dissapointing, but not bad. Its all learning and that's why I ask. If I may though, "quality" is a pretty general and broad term. Is there any specific aspect of the quality that should be improved upon or what? I really want to get a new camera because I think I have some of the technical aspects down to some degree, such as shutter speed/f-stops/appature, etc. but the camera quality is the weakest link... For now though, if there's anything specific you can point out, it is greatly appreciated.

Thanks, Jeff
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eadster
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RE: Pre-Screen Advice

Tue Aug 01, 2006 8:19 am

But to add if I can, that these are ALOT better than the previous edits that we saw a while back.
 
D L X
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RE: Pre-Screen Advice

Tue Aug 01, 2006 11:30 am

What do the originals look like? This might be bad editing for all 3.
 
jcf5002
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RE: Pre-Screen Advice

Thu Aug 03, 2006 9:04 am

Quoting Eadster (Reply 3):
But to add if I can, that these are ALOT better than the previous edits that we saw a while back.

Why thank you! I'm definately trying, and certainly not giving up!

Quoting D L X (Reply 4):
What do the originals look like? This might be bad editing for all 3.

The links above the photo's are the originals. If someone can give a looksee to try and edit them better than I, it would be much appreciated.

-Jeff
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maiznblu_757
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RE: Pre-Screen Advice

Thu Aug 03, 2006 9:11 am

Those are not the originals. Original edits maybe, but, not the product that came right out of the box.
 
jcf5002
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RE: Pre-Screen Advice

Thu Aug 03, 2006 10:00 am

Quoting Maiznblu_757 (Reply 6):
Those are not the originals. Original edits maybe, but, not the product that came right out of the box.

Sorry dude, but those are the ones that I downloaded straight from the camera. My camera shoots relatively small files and is only 4MP, so what you see is what I snapped...

-Jeff
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