I got a rejection for "motiv" this time (on the first upload attempt, it was rejected for my usual "soft"). It is never fun to get a reject, but every reject can be learned from! So, in fact I am happy that this time I could at least improve on the sharpening Now, I would just like to understand what caused the "motiv" rejection, so that I can avoid it I want to upload something similar.
This is the shot:
All advice welcome (also other shortcomings that you see, I want to learn as much as possible!).