This is a nice shot - I do like those where the sunlight is able to illuminate the inside of the engines. I think there are small issues:
I think the sharpening could be slightly more, and I wonder if you have slightly overdone the editing for the levels - the nose looks slightly 'overcooked', and the lower fuselage looks a bit too light. You haven't used the dreaded shadow/highlight tool have you? If you look at the edge of the fuselage just under the engine something doesn't look quite right.
This could be enough to cause the photo problems in the screening process.