locsta
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Second Edit Opinions Please

Sun Nov 19, 2006 6:20 am

this was rejected for soft.
http://www.airliners.net/procphotos/...061118_737-8Q8SunCountryN809SY.jpg

is this any better?


Thanks in advance for the comments!

Kevin
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flyfisher1976
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Sun Nov 19, 2006 9:01 am

Looks oversharpened now....was the original blurry?
 
locsta
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Sun Nov 19, 2006 1:49 pm

Quoting Flyfisher1976 (Reply 1):
....was the original blurry?

The original might have been a touch soft on the winglets and underside, but I don't think it was blurry? Was close to sunset so settings were pretty slow. I thought it was acceptedable per those conditions, but obviously not quite.
The first one was 1 pass at 120,.03, 0 of USM, the 2nd edit had one additional pass of the same and then a 50% oppacity pass at 90%, .02, 0 USM.

[Edited 2006-11-19 05:50:47]
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eadster
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Sun Nov 19, 2006 7:27 pm

Second shot looks fine here....
 
aussie18
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Sun Nov 19, 2006 8:47 pm

Edit looks better,can see the first one is soft around the nose so agree with rejection.
 
linco22
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Sun Nov 19, 2006 8:55 pm

Hi Kevin,

I think the second shot is better but the tail front edge is a little jaggie and the wings/winglets slightly but I think its fine otherwise. Cracking scheme on that 738 though

Good luck

Regards
Colin  Smile
 
locsta
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Mon Nov 20, 2006 3:47 am

thanks for the comments.
I will let it simmer in a folder till I have more upload space available, then maybe give it another go.  Wink
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Garri767
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Mon Nov 20, 2006 3:59 am

i must be the odd one out, but i agree with eadster, looks fine to me.




Garri767
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eadster
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RE: Second Edit Opinions Please

Mon Nov 20, 2006 5:20 am

Quoting Garri767 (Reply 7):
i must be the odd one out, but i agree with eadster, looks fine to me

Yeah, I can't see any jaggies that would cause issues. It's a great shot and great colours. If it were me I'd have a good feeling about that shot if it was in the Q.

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