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How Could This Be Improved?

Mon Jan 15, 2007 12:17 am

Hi All,

Nice and simple one really, how could this photo be improved?
Big version: Width: 1100 Height: 825 File size: 726kb


It is a preliminary edit, so anything you notice please tell as I would like it to be in database.

Thanks for the help.
Ryan
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dazbo5
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RE: How Could This Be Improved?

Mon Jan 15, 2007 2:53 am

Looks fantastic to me exactly as it is!

Darren
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9V
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RE: How Could This Be Improved?

Mon Jan 15, 2007 2:58 am

Was it shot in RAW? I like the motive but it looks poorly exposed around the nose and cockpit windows and soft around certain parts like the wings but sharp around the engines. The aircraft also looks too low in the frame.
 
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RE: How Could This Be Improved?

Mon Jan 15, 2007 3:53 am

Quoting Dazbo5 (Reply 1):
Looks fantastic to me exactly as it is!

Hi Darren, glad you like it!

Quoting 9V (Reply 2):
Was it shot in RAW? I like the motive but it looks poorly exposed around the nose and cockpit windows and soft around certain parts like the wings but sharp around the engines. The aircraft also looks too low in the frame.

Hi 9V.

No it wasn't shot in RAW. I've tried it out but I found some of the results to be more grainy than usual with my 300D. I remember Tim Goodwin having a similar problem with his.

Anyway, it amazes me how the exposure can vary from nose to the wings, how do you keep control of this? The sharpening can probably be improved by selective sharpening and I noticed it was too low when I uploaded it but I forgot to mention it.

Thanks for the help.

Any other ideas anyone?
Ryan
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RE: How Could This Be Improved?

Thu Jan 25, 2007 8:14 am

It was accepted:


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