locsta
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Pre-screening Comments Please

Mon Jan 15, 2007 6:52 am

Hey all,

Can I get some comments/feedback on these 3 shots please?





Thanks for your time!

Kevin
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eadster
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Mon Jan 15, 2007 6:57 am

Hey Kevin,

Shot 3 is a nice one, but why cut off the tail? I think that could be grounds for a motive rejection.

Others look ok to me.
 
glapira
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Mon Jan 15, 2007 7:37 am

Hi! I have to say that I like all of them ... but what I can see is:

1) Needs a new crop reducing the space from the nose to the right side and maybe lowering the plane a bit in the frame.

2) Might be bad dark, but I would maybe give it a try by lowering the plane a bit on the frame

3) it is an awesome shot!! But please give the plane its tail back! LoL In case you took the picture like that.. I would try an aggressive crop of the nose or maybe just after the end of the wing... but it would be much better with the full plane.

Good luck and keep up the good work!

Giorgio
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locsta
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Mon Jan 15, 2007 10:32 am

thanks for the comments guys. I took your suggestion Giorgio, and lowered the 1st 2 shots in the frame as much as I could with the space I had left, also fixed a slight red cast on the Herc.
I figured the 3rd was bad motive, it was a hurried shot as I had just arrived and was not set up yet. The full frame shot is blurry. Aside from the crop is the quality ok for the panning shot?

Heres the 1st 2 I uploaded....
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b.../USAAirForce73-1674cn21046-901.jpg
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/b...sL-382USAAirForce91-1232cn5282.jpg

Thanks again!

Kevin
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JeffM
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Mon Jan 15, 2007 11:10 am

1. is a bad center
2. bad motive for cutting the wing tip
3. bad motive for cutting off the empanage.
 
AdamWright
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Mon Jan 15, 2007 12:17 pm

Quoting JeffM (Reply 4):
2. bad motive for cutting the wing tip

Better take a closer look there Jeff.. he's got all the wing in the pic.

I think they all look acceptable.. and nice P-3 shot.. damn nice

-Adam
 
glapira
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Mon Jan 15, 2007 5:23 pm

Hi!

fantastic work on these man... now the 707 might be (not sure about that) still a bit bad cetered cuz of the nose and wing spaces to respective borders... but I think it will go trough. The Herk one seems Ok now... and in the P-3 I would definitely try a crop just after or just before the wing. It's a shame you don't have the complete plane, but you can try some different with what you have got.

Two examples...


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Kind Regards, Radial360
 
locsta
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:24 pm

thanks again for the comments guys.

I left a touch of breathing room on the nose of E3 because IMO it looked cramped any tighter....?

Only the stealth wing has been cut off the Herc  Yeah sure

I had tried a tight crop on the P-3, but it didn't look right. I think I will keep it for my personal collection as I am (and was) pretty sure about the motive.

I appreciate it!

Kevin
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locsta
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Fri Jan 26, 2007 7:56 am

Hi all,

Well the E-3 made it

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but the Herc was rejected for LEVEL and DARK.....
http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/r...sL-382USAAirForce91-1232cn5282.jpg

If I lighten it any more I think the grain in the shadowed areas will become a problem?

What do you guys think?

Thanks,

Kevin
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JeffM
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RE: Pre-screening Comments Please

Fri Jan 26, 2007 8:23 am

Quoting LOCsta (Reply 8):
What do you guys think?

Is it really worth it? C-130's are not that big of a deal are they?

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