damien846
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Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?

Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:02 am

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Hello again All,
Once again I need advice on this shot. Also is it a bit over sharpe?
Still got loads to learn ref editting!
Cheers
Damien
 
boeingfreak
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RE: Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?

Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:09 am

Hi,
I'd crop it closer on the right side, it looks kind of cut off now. It is also a bit low in frame for my taste.
Hope this helps,
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AC773
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RE: Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?

Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:10 am

The first thing I notice here is that you've slightly clipped the horizontal stabilizer. This is just my opinion of course, but I think you should either leave some more space on the right to let it show or cut off more of it and go all the way with centering the fuselage. Personally, I don't like to see it done halfway.

Good job though Damien, I'm seeing very visible progress compared with some of your last shots. Keep it up!  bigthumbsup 
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bubbles
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RE: Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?

Sat Apr 14, 2007 2:39 am

Hello Damien

I'd suggest keeping that stabilizer in the frame. By the way, the photo looks slightly soft. And the nose is a bit hot.

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damien846
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RE: Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?

Sat Apr 14, 2007 4:18 am

Thanks for the advice.

Quoting Bubbles (Reply 3):
By the way, the photo looks slightly soft. And the nose is a bit hot.

Understand the hot nose. But not sure what you mean ref slighly soft?
here is a second attempt at an edit.
and below the orignal!

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JeffM
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RE: Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?

Sat Apr 14, 2007 4:25 am

How many more pictures of that plane do you have?  rotfl  You should branch out a little.
 
damien846
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RE: Is The Crop/Motive OK On This Shot?

Sat Apr 14, 2007 4:34 am

Quoting JeffM (Reply 5):
How many more pictures of that plane do you have? rotfl You should branch out a little.

Taken on this day? About 30? Would you like to see them all!
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