andersosl
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Joined: Tue Feb 28, 2006 1:16 am

Pre-screening

Sun May 27, 2007 5:32 am

Hi.
Need some pre-screening on these two shots:

http://home.no.net/ssaero/bilds/IMG_0713.jpg

http://home.no.net/ssaero/bilds/IMG_04542.jpg


Had five images rejected for "oversharpened" last time I uploaded here, so I've tried to hold back on the sharpening this time.

Thanks!
 
boeingfreak
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Joined: Sun May 29, 2005 7:07 pm

RE: Pre-screening

Sun May 27, 2007 5:59 am

Hi,
your first shot is a bit soft especially around the passenger windows, the "Austrian Arrows" titles, the cockpit windows and around the nose. For my taste the nose is also a bit too bright.

Your second one is clearly overexposed, the white top of the A320 is blown out.

With some proper editing both could be made acceptable, the first one is easy to correct, the second one only if the original is a RAW file.

Hope this helps,
Florian  wave 
 
andersosl
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Joined: Tue Feb 28, 2006 1:16 am

RE: Pre-screening

Sun May 27, 2007 6:53 am

Thannks, Florian!

Tried to re-edit the pcitures, and here's the result:

http://home.no.net/ssaero/bilds/v2/IMG_07130.jpg

http://home.no.net/ssaero/bilds/v2/IMG_0454.jpg

Are they any better?

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