flamedude707
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Advice Needed On This Shot...

Thu Jun 14, 2007 12:39 pm

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/big/ready/wing233453434.jpg

In the queue... please let me know if it needs to be improved or pulled.

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Ashwin
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RE: Advice Needed On This Shot...

Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:24 pm

To me its slightly jaggered, yet parts of the trailing edge are very soft.

I think the cloud cover kinda ruins the view. Or maybe the mountains should be a little further into the frame.

I'm not sure how that one will do. Better wait for some other opinions.
 
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RE: Advice Needed On This Shot...

Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:55 pm

Hi Ashwin,

To me the wing looks slightly soft/out of focus (but watch those black lines, they are just about to be oversharpened), and maybe it would need a tad more contrast. Motive-wise should be OK.
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RE: Advice Needed On This Shot...

Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:21 am

Ashwin

Nice pic!
There´s too much non-aircraft space to the left, which makes the picture a bit unbalanced, IMO. I´d crop out a bit of this, maybe with a 4:3 frame ratio it can work better.
Wing is too soft, if not out of focus, and there are some jagged lines, as Martin said. I agree with the low contrast also.
The ground looks too blue, is it normal for such kind of shot?

Hope it helps.  thumbsup 

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RE: Advice Needed On This Shot...

Fri Jun 15, 2007 4:33 am

re edit with crop and some other changes...

Please tell me what can be improved. I think it still may be a bit jagged.

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/big/ready/wingedit12332.jpg

Thanks

Ashwin

PS. Here is the original. If anyone can give it a try at editing this, it would be greatly appreciated.
Big version: Width: 2816 Height: 1880 File size: 1295kb


[Edited 2007-06-14 21:49:32]
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RE: Advice Needed On This Shot...

Fri Jun 15, 2007 9:03 am

Quoting Flamedude707 (Reply 4):
Please tell me what can be improved. I think it still may be a bit jagged.

Improved, motive-wise, but quality is still an issue. Wing is jagged and soft (flap edges are out of focus). Also deserves some more contrast. I´ll give it a go from scratch and let you know.

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RE: Advice Needed On This Shot...

Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:31 pm

Ashwin

Here´s my attempt. I tried to work with the sharpening, at first, and some minor adjustments to contrast and brightness. There´s still work to do on the bright mountains and the overall colour, but I didn´t know actually how to face these issues.
Hope it helps. Big grin

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