KLM772ER
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Window View, Motiv Ok?

Wed Oct 17, 2007 9:32 pm

Hello,

I have this shot taken while landing in the early morning in Gdansk, with the low sun nicely illuminating the hydraulics from behind.. do you think it is ok motiv wise? Or do you see any other flaws that might lead to a rejection??

http://www.airliners.net/addphotos/big/ready/HA-LPCVenghaus13.jpg

Cheers
Björn
 
ilikeflight
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RE: Window View, Motiv Ok?

Wed Oct 17, 2007 10:09 pm

I'd say its borderline on a motive rejection
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JRadier
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RE: Window View, Motiv Ok?

Wed Oct 17, 2007 10:10 pm

motive looks fine to me, as I got this accepted (although a slightly more interesting background):


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Lanas
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RE: Window View, Motiv Ok?

Thu Oct 18, 2007 5:06 am

Hi Björn

The motive is fine. However:
- It´s oversharpened. The hydraulics look a bit lego-like, for example.
- Too much contrast into it.
- A bit unlevel. If you check the pole on the right and the tower on the left, they lean according to different angles. I´d give it a tad CW in order to compensate that.
- There might be some greenish colour cast into it, but I´m not so sure.

Hope it helps.  thumbsup 

Cheers  Smile
Lanas.-
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KLM772ER
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RE: Window View, Motiv Ok?

Thu Oct 18, 2007 9:46 am

Quoting Lanas (Reply 3):
The motive is fine. However:
- It´s oversharpened. The hydraulics look a bit lego-like, for example.
- Too much contrast into it.
- A bit unlevel. If you check the pole on the right and the tower on the left, they lean according to different angles. I´d give it a tad CW in order to compensate that.
- There might be some greenish colour cast into it, but I´m not so sure.

Now I see again why I didn't upload it in summer when I took and edited it  Wink But you are right..
It is hard to see everything after a break..  Wink but hopefully it will get better again soon... thanks!

Cheers
Björn

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