Regarding the leveling, the first one needs some CCW Rotation, as for the second I am not quite sure, but probably a little too. (the main panel looks a little off to me..)
As for the quality, in the first one try to give the MCP
and the thrust leavers a little more sharpening as they are very soft (out of focus, which aperture did you use, as the picture has very little depth of field..) and I would brighten the midtones a little up.
But to be honest, I think the softness, especially at the MCP
, will lead to a rejection as it is very distracting in my opinion..
But wait if others do agree..
The second one has again a depth of field problem IMHO. With the lower part of the image looking very soft, while the upper part looks a little oversharpened to me..
Hope this helps!