Indeed, the first one needed some CCW rotation. I think you went too far with the rotation on your edit. A tiny CW adjustment would work.
The colours look better as well. I think IÂ´d ease just a bit on the red channel, however.
Good luck with it.
"Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens." J.R.R. Tolkien
Try with 0.09Â° CCW rotation, and check the verticals ( near the center of the windshield )
I like the number 1, the number 2 has a little red colour cast in my opinion.
Good luck and I hope that helps