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A Couple More Prescreens....opinions Plz...

Sat Feb 16, 2008 2:52 am

Hi All,
I got these this afternoon afternoon at the local airport. Would like opinions to see if they are db worthy...Thanks!!

Andy  Wink


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RE: A Couple More Prescreens....opinions Plz...

Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:28 am

Hi Andy,

not quite there I'm afraid. The cockpit has the outside completely over-exposed. It is better to expose for the outside and use a flash to illuminate the inside.
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For this one I just used the built-in flash, you can see it on the screens a little bit. For best results it's preferred to use an external flash and bounce it off the ceiling.

The cabin is a bit dark and not level. Will require a bit of CCW rotation and more sharpening as well.

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RE: A Couple More Prescreens....opinions Plz...

Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:20 am

Hi Andy

Ivan has almost said what I want to say.

For the first one, outside is overexposed. The image is grainy and not level.

The second one is grainy, not level, and a little dark.

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RE: A Couple More Prescreens....opinions Plz...

Sat Feb 16, 2008 11:30 am

Thanks for the critiques guys!! I'll try and fix up the cabin shot, and I was afraid of the overexposure on the cockpit shot. Thanks again!!


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RE: A Couple More Prescreens....opinions Plz...

Sat Feb 16, 2008 12:29 pm



Quoting Bubbles (Reply 2):
The second one is grainy, not level, and a little dark.

Like Hongyin (who is a screener) said, the quality is not there. One of the problems is that the depth of field appears a little insufficient, so that objects close to the lens and objects in the distance (like the figures in the background and the edges of the bins in the extreme foreground) appear blurry.

In addition to that, it is not well-centred - the aisle is awkwardly off the middle of the image. One thing that a.net likes in its interior shots (although there are as always many exceptions) is symmetry.

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