ocean773
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Photo Acceptance - Pre Screeing

Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:14 am

Hello

I have two photo's and would welcome any suggestions for improvement before sending in que.

Any information will be appreciated.

http://www.airliners.net/uf/view.fil...=536943032&filename=php0BCV6e.jpeg

and

http://www.airliners.net/uf/view.fil...=536943032&filename=php3bP4zU.jpeg

Thanks
Sam
 
dlowwa
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre Screeing

Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:21 am



Quoting Ocean773 (Thread starter):
Any information will be appreciated.

Well, to start with, you'll need much better crops. The first one is far too low in the frame, and has empty space to the left and right of the plane.

The second one is also far too low in the frame, and has empty space to the left and then part of the horizontal stabilizer cut off.

Both also seem to suffer from over sharpening.

Come back and try again with some better crops.
 
ocean773
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre Screeing

Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:51 am

 
dlowwa
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre Screeing

Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:56 am



Quoting Ocean773 (Reply 2):
let me know what you think of new ones below

uhhh... they look the same to me.
 
aussie18
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre Screeing

Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:29 am

Both are oversharpened quite badly,Noticable jagged edges on Virgin tail,Virgin titling,wing etc,also backlit and centring is way off,try to centre the fuselage in centre of frame so you have equal amount of deadspace at top-top fuselage and bottom-bottom of fuselage.

ANZ A320 one is still low in frame,needs tighter crop on each end aswell,Jaggy edges quite noticable around wing,tail wing,engine and ANZ titling.

Cheers Mark.

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