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Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)

Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:11 am

Hey all,

How does this one shape up?

http://www5.picturepush.com/photo/a/1817863/img/JP.NET-%2526-A.NET-Prescreening/PH-BXPfront.jpg

Thankyou in advanced!

Jimmy Leaman
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)

Sun Jun 07, 2009 2:21 am

The nose seems soft and overexposed.

How much sharpening did you apply? I can see some jaggies on the titles and vert stabilizer.

I suck at centering, but I'd move it up just a touch in the frame.
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)

Sun Jun 07, 2009 7:44 am

There also seems to be a slight red colour cast too.

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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)

Sun Jun 07, 2009 7:46 am



Quoting Alevik (Reply 1):
I'd move it up just a touch in the frame.

I don't think centering is too much of a problem here, it looks just about right to me. Those other issues you mentioned are visibly apparent, though.
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)

Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:37 pm

Hey all.

Ive reworked the image based on your advice and here is the result.

How do you think it looks?

http://www2.picturepush.com/photo/a/1824915/img/JP.NET-%2526-A.NET-Prescreening/PH-BXPfront.jpg

Thanks in advanced.
Regards, Jimmy Leaman.
 
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)

Mon Jun 08, 2009 3:02 pm

Hi Jimmy,

The new edit looks too soft, but more important, whatever you did to the nose looks very unnatural - that would be an 'editing' rejection. As far as I can see, the nose is probably too overexposed in the first place to be rescued, so it will probably never make it - sorry.

Hope it helps  Smile
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RE: Photo Acceptance - Pre-Screening (Jimmy Leaman)

Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:08 pm

Hello, thanks for your prompt reply.

I agree with you regarding the nose, however i think applied to much 'burn tool', so i will give it a sharpen and another shot and let you know.

Thanks.
Regards, Jimmy Leaman.

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