Hey KL692, its Max, the guy you spotted with!
Fundamentally these are actually extremely well executed shots, that pack good quality as well as motive. In terms of the editing, try not to oversharpen some, and use selective sharpening like I told you. This will help reduce noise, and tastefully increase sharpness, and not compromise quality. There are lots of videos on youtube like this one;
Also when using a sharpening mask use something like 50,0.5,1. Usually does the trick for me.
Now, in terms of lighting, the only major issue with that, would be with the 23 overhead shots, They are just a tad dark.
Thats the same westjet we got. Dana Low told me the only issues possible with that one were; level, haze, and centering. So I guess you can use it as a guideline for sharpening. Anyways, good luck, believe me you have mostly very nice shots, and I d say most of them would in fact get in with some good editing. Cya, and good luck![Edited 2012-04-08 08:25:23]
[Edited 2012-04-08 08:26:02]